for Towards the Light9/7/2010 c5 Cronolink
Cool story so far. It's different, which is good. The only constructive criticism I have to offer is the chapters could be a little longer but other than that keep up the good work and thanks for writing.
Cool story so far. It's different, which is good. The only constructive criticism I have to offer is the chapters could be a little longer but other than that keep up the good work and thanks for writing.
9/7/2010 c5 Guest
Great story. Can't wait till next chapter!
Great story. Can't wait till next chapter!
9/7/2010 c5 sakuraforeverL
Awesome soo farr! Update sooooonnnn! please! :D
Awesome soo farr! Update sooooonnnn! please! :D
9/7/2010 c5 
2Rise Against713
Awesome chapter. I expected that cliffy to come eventually and i'm glad it came sooner rather than later.
Anyway can't wait for the next chapter. The moment we've all been waiting for.
2Rise Against713Awesome chapter. I expected that cliffy to come eventually and i'm glad it came sooner rather than later.
Anyway can't wait for the next chapter. The moment we've all been waiting for.
9/7/2010 c5 ll Kairi ll
oooo! I like the chapter. In my mind, i was waiting impatiently for Naruto to awake! I can't wait till the next chapter! 33333
oooo! I like the chapter. In my mind, i was waiting impatiently for Naruto to awake! I can't wait till the next chapter! 33333
9/7/2010 c5 T00STr00nG
damn this is crazy. But I am curious since Naruto doesn't have the Kyuubi that means he still has huge amounts of chakara along with his healing abilites?Update soon.
damn this is crazy. But I am curious since Naruto doesn't have the Kyuubi that means he still has huge amounts of chakara along with his healing abilites?Update soon.
8/30/2010 c4 hatakevan
wow, what a great story! i can't wait till naruto wakes up. keep it up cus this story is really good!
wow, what a great story! i can't wait till naruto wakes up. keep it up cus this story is really good!
8/30/2010 c4 3holydemon00
I never have amnesia so I really can't tell if your fic is realistic enough, but your storytelling is topnotch, throwing us readers into confusion and misdirection. His fragmented thought flowed seamlessly with his sense of surrounding. It feels as if Naruto's thought was mine.
3holydemon00I never have amnesia so I really can't tell if your fic is realistic enough, but your storytelling is topnotch, throwing us readers into confusion and misdirection. His fragmented thought flowed seamlessly with his sense of surrounding. It feels as if Naruto's thought was mine.
8/30/2010 c4 3SekiiChan
This is pretty cool, but confusing at the same time. actually the only thing that confuses me a little is whats going on in Naruto's mind.. does he have amnesia or did whatever those people did to him drive him insane? Well, anyway..
what I liked, was how realistic it was! It's pretty good in that compartment :D I also love the plot, it's really interesting and has me wanting to read mooooooooore! T^T Oh, and how you wrote what was going on in Naruto's head. I thought it was kind of poetic cause it had a lot of repitition and it had that feeling y'know. Pretty cool
What I didn't like...well, can't say much for that.. I mean, maybe the length but that's pretty much it.
I LOVE IT!
3SekiiChanThis is pretty cool, but confusing at the same time. actually the only thing that confuses me a little is whats going on in Naruto's mind.. does he have amnesia or did whatever those people did to him drive him insane? Well, anyway..
what I liked, was how realistic it was! It's pretty good in that compartment :D I also love the plot, it's really interesting and has me wanting to read mooooooooore! T^T Oh, and how you wrote what was going on in Naruto's head. I thought it was kind of poetic cause it had a lot of repitition and it had that feeling y'know. Pretty cool
What I didn't like...well, can't say much for that.. I mean, maybe the length but that's pretty much it.
I LOVE IT!