for Had to Be There Pt 19/27/2016 c5 Guest
One thing he isn't aloud into the Laborite
Without the forenic sciences say so. Security would remove that person forth with Abby has more skill than Gibbs has
One thing he isn't aloud into the Laborite
Without the forenic sciences say so. Security would remove that person forth with Abby has more skill than Gibbs has
5/23/2012 c1 
27Madances
I do not remember if I reviewed this story but are you still planning a part 2? Tracy
27MadancesI do not remember if I reviewed this story but are you still planning a part 2? Tracy
8/11/2011 c7 13gaben
Great start to this story. A plausible plot, though I think Gibbs would have a female present when he took samatha home. Ziva or Abby to be safe and appropiate. It is well written and is has good pace. Love your little hook at the end if each chapter, and the Gibbs / narrator banter.
Just two things, I don't think Gibbs would have diciplined ziva for bagging evidance and keeping it from Fornell. I think he would have been angier for waiting fir back up.
I also don't belive he would have called sam baby after he spenked her. He may be concerned about the welfare of this child but I don't think he would have made that emotional connection yet, I think he would have got more of her story first. Told her he understood her fear. He would have built trust first. He would have interviewed her first.
Just a little thing but more plausible in my book.
Great plot and waiting eagerly for part 2.
13gabenGreat start to this story. A plausible plot, though I think Gibbs would have a female present when he took samatha home. Ziva or Abby to be safe and appropiate. It is well written and is has good pace. Love your little hook at the end if each chapter, and the Gibbs / narrator banter.
Just two things, I don't think Gibbs would have diciplined ziva for bagging evidance and keeping it from Fornell. I think he would have been angier for waiting fir back up.
I also don't belive he would have called sam baby after he spenked her. He may be concerned about the welfare of this child but I don't think he would have made that emotional connection yet, I think he would have got more of her story first. Told her he understood her fear. He would have built trust first. He would have interviewed her first.
Just a little thing but more plausible in my book.
Great plot and waiting eagerly for part 2.
3/28/2011 c7 6Aragorna Strider
That was such a good story! I love it and I hope to see part 2 out soon.
6Aragorna StriderThat was such a good story! I love it and I hope to see part 2 out soon.
10/22/2010 c7 5wordswontstop
Oh no! PLEASE say you're going to post Part 2 super soon! I really love this story! Sam's a sweet girl, I like her. Spunky kid. I want to see her meet Tony. :) You're an excellent writer, you gotta keep writing! Please? Pretty please?
~Ryleigh
5wordswontstopOh no! PLEASE say you're going to post Part 2 super soon! I really love this story! Sam's a sweet girl, I like her. Spunky kid. I want to see her meet Tony. :) You're an excellent writer, you gotta keep writing! Please? Pretty please?
~Ryleigh
8/18/2010 c7 8BnBfanatic
Good story - while it's a little too silly for my tastes I am sure there are plenty of readers who like that. But why don't we ever get to see how Tony's doing?
8BnBfanaticGood story - while it's a little too silly for my tastes I am sure there are plenty of readers who like that. But why don't we ever get to see how Tony's doing?
8/17/2010 c7 17DS2010
I love your story. Especially the running dialog at the end of each chapter. Your commentary made me laugh...
17DS2010I love your story. Especially the running dialog at the end of each chapter. Your commentary made me laugh...
8/16/2010 c5 Meilea2010
Tony got shot? Thinkk I missed something and should go back a couple of chapters and read them again. When do w e get the next update?
Tony got shot? Thinkk I missed something and should go back a couple of chapters and read them again. When do w e get the next update?
8/16/2010 c4 DS2010
Loving the story and I still ove your dialog with the characters. I think it wonderful and makes me laugh!
Loving the story and I still ove your dialog with the characters. I think it wonderful and makes me laugh!