
6/6/2013 c1
1Princess Mofo 2012
Love it. Would like to see it turn into a full fledged story. Absolutely amazing.

Love it. Would like to see it turn into a full fledged story. Absolutely amazing.
9/10/2011 c1
1Runaway'96
Great one-shot! :) I loved it! I watched this episode the other day and wanted them to get together and i'm glad you did this fanfic! :D xx

Great one-shot! :) I loved it! I watched this episode the other day and wanted them to get together and i'm glad you did this fanfic! :D xx
1/23/2011 c1
24JBubbles
My most honest opinion:
I feel sad for losing half the season one of this serires, but I can't see the base for this relationship. BUT, you have to work on your grammar and literally style, the fic could be much better if you just beta-ed it.
I could correct it if you like, 'cause I enjoyed the idea as much as I liked the episode.

My most honest opinion:
I feel sad for losing half the season one of this serires, but I can't see the base for this relationship. BUT, you have to work on your grammar and literally style, the fic could be much better if you just beta-ed it.
I could correct it if you like, 'cause I enjoyed the idea as much as I liked the episode.
11/29/2010 c1 Stephanie carlisle
Add another story but let's try some Kaylie/Marty stories as well
Add another story but let's try some Kaylie/Marty stories as well
8/13/2010 c1 katt
Absolutely great. This definitely needed to be done. I think if you wanted you could go a bit into the whole forbidden romance thing, or you could leave it as is.
Absolutely great. This definitely needed to be done. I think if you wanted you could go a bit into the whole forbidden romance thing, or you could leave it as is.
8/6/2010 c1 anonymous
I agree with loveinstantstar. You should continue with this story.
I agree with loveinstantstar. You should continue with this story.
8/6/2010 c1 Cassie
this story sounds alot like another one i read recently ... it sounds alot like the gymnast and the coach by caterinafan159
this story sounds alot like another one i read recently ... it sounds alot like the gymnast and the coach by caterinafan159
8/6/2010 c1
1loveinstantstar
Hi
I love this one-shot, but do you think there is a chance you will continue this story instead of just this one chapter.

Hi
I love this one-shot, but do you think there is a chance you will continue this story instead of just this one chapter.