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7/1/2014 c11 
21TrixieNancy124
This is really good and interesting. Now the plot just thickens so much. Do continue this!
21TrixieNancy124This is really good and interesting. Now the plot just thickens so much. Do continue this!
5/14/2013 c7 Guest
This is a really good story, please keep going! Yesterday, i felt like what mitchie felt like... about to pass out. (I joined my swim team this tear, and the first practice was yesterday. They had us doing really hard exercises & i got so dizzy i couldn't stand up. They called the lifeguard over & he half-carried me to the break room, where i threw up.) :D that was not a fun day!
This is a really good story, please keep going! Yesterday, i felt like what mitchie felt like... about to pass out. (I joined my swim team this tear, and the first practice was yesterday. They had us doing really hard exercises & i got so dizzy i couldn't stand up. They called the lifeguard over & he half-carried me to the break room, where i threw up.) :D that was not a fun day!
5/13/2013 c8 SARAH D
Poor Mitchie. I somewhat know what it feels like to be unresponsive to other people- like what mitchie did. (If i get too hot, i will go into a state-of-mind where i can hear & see things, but i cannot do anything. I can't move, i can't talk. The only way to snap out of it is to get dragged-literally- over to some shade. Oh and i also get really cold... Which is ironic.)
Poor Mitchie. I somewhat know what it feels like to be unresponsive to other people- like what mitchie did. (If i get too hot, i will go into a state-of-mind where i can hear & see things, but i cannot do anything. I can't move, i can't talk. The only way to snap out of it is to get dragged-literally- over to some shade. Oh and i also get really cold... Which is ironic.)
5/13/2013 c11 Guest
Please keep going! (If your out of ideas, i dunno, maybe have Mitchie be by a police station, and have the boys go to that police station... :D )
Please keep going! (If your out of ideas, i dunno, maybe have Mitchie be by a police station, and have the boys go to that police station... :D )
5/14/2012 c11 sdnsdibjsdfn
Hi there! I just read through the entire story the past few days and it is totally awesome! I think I've told you before that you are one of my favorite authors ever on this website and your stories are some of my favorites! I like how your stories always involve someone getting kidnapped. It makes the whole plot so dramatic and I remember them 'cause they are so unique. Please update soon with another chapter! See you around! :)
- CDCTheRandomWizard23
Hi there! I just read through the entire story the past few days and it is totally awesome! I think I've told you before that you are one of my favorite authors ever on this website and your stories are some of my favorites! I like how your stories always involve someone getting kidnapped. It makes the whole plot so dramatic and I remember them 'cause they are so unique. Please update soon with another chapter! See you around! :)
- CDCTheRandomWizard23
4/6/2012 c11 Sara smiles
Hey I love this fanfiction. Please keep writing! How many chapters are there gonna be? Ive got a suggestion for the fanfic: Mitchie could run into Caitlyn Or something, I don't know. Have you already written the other chapters? When will you most likely update again? Thanks alot and please keep writing! #Jonasobsessed:)
Hey I love this fanfiction. Please keep writing! How many chapters are there gonna be? Ive got a suggestion for the fanfic: Mitchie could run into Caitlyn Or something, I don't know. Have you already written the other chapters? When will you most likely update again? Thanks alot and please keep writing! #Jonasobsessed:)
3/5/2012 c11 Guest
Omg! What's she going to do? Update soon please!
Omg! What's she going to do? Update soon please!
2/25/2012 c10 wordsofjade
Im so happy to be reading somethingof urs bc its been so long! great job! cant wait for more. :D
Im so happy to be reading somethingof urs bc its been so long! great job! cant wait for more. :D
8/6/2011 c9 Guest
U have to update plzzz and mabye tell how and what happened to mitchie after her father put somthing in her eyes!
U have to update plzzz and mabye tell how and what happened to mitchie after her father put somthing in her eyes!
1/9/2011 c1 hola
Awesome story! Please continue and dont forget
Awesome story! Please continue and dont forget