for Before Remembering a prequel to Please Remember Me6/13/2011 c2 luvvamps
That is so sad. It made me cry. It's really hard to read with tears in my eyes.
That is so sad. It made me cry. It's really hard to read with tears in my eyes.
5/18/2011 c3 CurlyQ2102
Absolutely LOVED seeing through Sookie's eyes! It felt genuine and swept me away as if I was in her place with *sigh* that Viking. I hope to heck and back that she gets turned in the next segment of the series. I'm curious to read your spin on of her rising as vampire and their life together. The changes, drama, awesome sex *wiggles eyebrows* and other character reactions.
Some other stories swing too one way or another, making Sookie the annoyingly obtuse back water hick, or too butch, hard, and calculating...in the words of Goldilocks my dear... "this one's JUST right!"
xoxoxo
Gabby
Absolutely LOVED seeing through Sookie's eyes! It felt genuine and swept me away as if I was in her place with *sigh* that Viking. I hope to heck and back that she gets turned in the next segment of the series. I'm curious to read your spin on of her rising as vampire and their life together. The changes, drama, awesome sex *wiggles eyebrows* and other character reactions.
Some other stories swing too one way or another, making Sookie the annoyingly obtuse back water hick, or too butch, hard, and calculating...in the words of Goldilocks my dear... "this one's JUST right!"
xoxoxo
Gabby
5/18/2011 c2 CurlyQ2102
I love the backstory with Pam and how you portray her character. A lot of times I think the actual True Blood show loses sight of her "softer" side, something of which I feel you have captured beautifully. There was a portion towards the latter part of the middle where I got confused and had to go back and reread. The switch of perspectives and repeat of dialouge was but a snag however, and I was easily able to figure it out. I admire your ability to make the most of your content without drowning the reader in too many words,(its something I struggle with personaly). I myself am a first time writer, so considering this was one of your "broken cherry" pieces, I'm more than a little impressed! :)
On to the next chapter...
I love the backstory with Pam and how you portray her character. A lot of times I think the actual True Blood show loses sight of her "softer" side, something of which I feel you have captured beautifully. There was a portion towards the latter part of the middle where I got confused and had to go back and reread. The switch of perspectives and repeat of dialouge was but a snag however, and I was easily able to figure it out. I admire your ability to make the most of your content without drowning the reader in too many words,(its something I struggle with personaly). I myself am a first time writer, so considering this was one of your "broken cherry" pieces, I'm more than a little impressed! :)
On to the next chapter...
2/27/2011 c3 janiaco
So glad I found your story to read. Another wonderful Eric/Sookie story.
I know authors look for chapter reviews but most times I am too into the story and need to keep going from chapter to chapter to stop and review one particular chapter.
Please know you should continue writing as we the readers do appreciate your work.
Thanks,
Janet
So glad I found your story to read. Another wonderful Eric/Sookie story.
I know authors look for chapter reviews but most times I am too into the story and need to keep going from chapter to chapter to stop and review one particular chapter.
Please know you should continue writing as we the readers do appreciate your work.
Thanks,
Janet
2/22/2011 c3 Sarahjskelly
Really loving your story :-) just started Reading today and now I'm hooked!
Really loving your story :-) just started Reading today and now I'm hooked!
2/22/2011 c3 Sarahjskelly
Really loving your story :-) just started Reading today and now I'm hooked!
Really loving your story :-) just started Reading today and now I'm hooked!
2/8/2011 c2 desireecarbenell
Damn you are really a good writer. I am crying like a silly 12 year old. Great job.
Damn you are really a good writer. I am crying like a silly 12 year old. Great job.
12/12/2010 c2 mybonded
love PPOV... One of my friends is writing as well and wishes she would get more reviews...try and let it not discourage you...love the story so fare.
love PPOV... One of my friends is writing as well and wishes she would get more reviews...try and let it not discourage you...love the story so fare.
12/12/2010 c1 mybonded
just started reading your stories. i like how this follows the book. its like a side story or different perspective on the books...i think this is the first i have read like this...i will con't to read on!
just started reading your stories. i like how this follows the book. its like a side story or different perspective on the books...i think this is the first i have read like this...i will con't to read on!
11/7/2010 c3 
2Maori kotiro
Damn i had tears one minute then the next im all smiles...cant wait to see if she does become a vamp...lol...interesting
2Maori kotiroDamn i had tears one minute then the next im all smiles...cant wait to see if she does become a vamp...lol...interesting