9/28/2010 c1 Siberian shewolf
OMG, I wish I'd read this one before I read Remember Me. Loved the story thank you. :)
OMG, I wish I'd read this one before I read Remember Me. Loved the story thank you. :)
9/14/2010 c1 csdy7
Really enjoyed Eric's POV. He certainly is OCD about the word 'yield' and being the big bad of Area 5... *giggle*
Love the way your writing flows... just make me want to keep reading more. **Thanks for sharing your talent!**
Really enjoyed Eric's POV. He certainly is OCD about the word 'yield' and being the big bad of Area 5... *giggle*
Love the way your writing flows... just make me want to keep reading more. **Thanks for sharing your talent!**
9/1/2010 c2 ericsgirl1
I don't know how I missed this story but so far I love it! Tears are falling from my eyes as we speak and that doesn't happen often. Hope you keep it up! I don't read a lot of one shots so maybe that is why. LOL :)
I don't know how I missed this story but so far I love it! Tears are falling from my eyes as we speak and that doesn't happen often. Hope you keep it up! I don't read a lot of one shots so maybe that is why. LOL :)
8/27/2010 c3 2DDreads
Wonderful story. Just found it. I am sorry but I am one of those people who just cant WAIT for daily postings so I usually sort the fanfiction by COMPLETE and read only those that are done. It is hard enough being sucked into several authors Part II and III's...like you have just done.
I dont know if part 2 is finished but now I must follow...
When I first discovered fanfiction, I read anything. I found a wonderful story and was reading into like 5 or 6 chapters and then it just stopped. I was on a cliffhanger and the writer just quit or disappeared. The story had been left for like 6 mths with NO attempt to finish. I sent emails and reviews but nothing.
This happened a few more times. So I got mad and only read completes now. So sorry...but I did put you in my favorite authors because you had me crying through all 3 chapters...you wrote the emotion so well...your a fave...I will make a point to read your stories in progress...and comment...
Promise..
Thanks and looking forward to reading part 2 - I cant wait to see if it is finished!
Thanks
Dianna
Wonderful story. Just found it. I am sorry but I am one of those people who just cant WAIT for daily postings so I usually sort the fanfiction by COMPLETE and read only those that are done. It is hard enough being sucked into several authors Part II and III's...like you have just done.
I dont know if part 2 is finished but now I must follow...
When I first discovered fanfiction, I read anything. I found a wonderful story and was reading into like 5 or 6 chapters and then it just stopped. I was on a cliffhanger and the writer just quit or disappeared. The story had been left for like 6 mths with NO attempt to finish. I sent emails and reviews but nothing.
This happened a few more times. So I got mad and only read completes now. So sorry...but I did put you in my favorite authors because you had me crying through all 3 chapters...you wrote the emotion so well...your a fave...I will make a point to read your stories in progress...and comment...
Promise..
Thanks and looking forward to reading part 2 - I cant wait to see if it is finished!
Thanks
Dianna
8/25/2010 c3 sexyalex
I love how you wrote everyone's POV. Great job! i'can't the read the next installment to this.
I love how you wrote everyone's POV. Great job! i'can't the read the next installment to this.
8/24/2010 c3 28moriah93ohio
Great chapter! Awww she agreed to marry him? I look forward to reading the next story!
Great chapter! Awww she agreed to marry him? I look forward to reading the next story!
8/24/2010 c2 moriah93ohio
Great chapter! I loved it! Aww poor Pam. I loved her background after Eric released her.
Great chapter! I loved it! Aww poor Pam. I loved her background after Eric released her.
8/23/2010 c3 Eric's No 1 lover
I loved this story, if only it could have happened like this...
Pam's story was beautiful and moving and made me cry.
Thank you for sharing this story.
I loved this story, if only it could have happened like this...
Pam's story was beautiful and moving and made me cry.
Thank you for sharing this story.