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14KattytoNebel
El tema del suicidio es tan delicado
Adiós, Rukia. Al menos en este one-shot.
Saludos
14KattytoNebelEl tema del suicidio es tan delicado
Adiós, Rukia. Al menos en este one-shot.
Saludos
10/24/2013 c1 960Yemi Hikari
Sorry, but no. The Rukia we all know and love from Bleach would not commit suicide. Also, why would Toshiro leave Rukia for Momo? He grew up with Momo as foster siblings. Of course, there is also nothing explaining why Rukia was together with Toshiro despite the fact he is a captain and much younger then her either.
960Yemi HikariSorry, but no. The Rukia we all know and love from Bleach would not commit suicide. Also, why would Toshiro leave Rukia for Momo? He grew up with Momo as foster siblings. Of course, there is also nothing explaining why Rukia was together with Toshiro despite the fact he is a captain and much younger then her either.
1/18/2013 c1 1Scarlett Foxie
What an utterly horrible selfish woman. The way you've portrayed her makes me want to punish her severely.
1Scarlett FoxieWhat an utterly horrible selfish woman. The way you've portrayed her makes me want to punish her severely.
1/4/2013 c1 riku
that is so sad aww so sad i am in love with this story and it is so beautiful story it makes me want to cry
that is so sad aww so sad i am in love with this story and it is so beautiful story it makes me want to cry
6/8/2012 c1 Loveruki234
How sad I think I am crying
How sad I think I am crying
8/8/2010 c1 CJ
I am sorry to say, although you write very well and it is a sad tale, its just not Rukia. Rukia would never killed herslef, especialy if she is with child. Rukia in my opion is totally OoC, and wish you would have fit the character into the story rather than the other way around. I read a lot about weepy Rukia, I wonder if these writers really read Bleach or whether these writers just project their personalities into Rukia. While this may seems harsh, like I said earlier on, you are a good wtiter, please just to confuse your own personal fic character with one that is already well established such as Rukia. Please take this as a challenge, I look forward to read more of your work.
I am sorry to say, although you write very well and it is a sad tale, its just not Rukia. Rukia would never killed herslef, especialy if she is with child. Rukia in my opion is totally OoC, and wish you would have fit the character into the story rather than the other way around. I read a lot about weepy Rukia, I wonder if these writers really read Bleach or whether these writers just project their personalities into Rukia. While this may seems harsh, like I said earlier on, you are a good wtiter, please just to confuse your own personal fic character with one that is already well established such as Rukia. Please take this as a challenge, I look forward to read more of your work.
8/8/2010 c1 Charming Nature
'don't cry don't cry don't...'
Whaaaaaaaaaa! This story was sad!*Cries*
Damn, I said don't cry!
'don't cry don't cry don't...'
Whaaaaaaaaaa! This story was sad!*Cries*
Damn, I said don't cry!