
8/9/2010 c1
1k+reminiscent-afterthought
Pretty interesting, the way you've done this. I assume this takes place in the first season, seeing as though Chumley is present? Anyway, great job, really good premise. I've read alot of stories with Jaden having a sibling (or siblings in some cases) but they're not nearly as well written as this. I'd love to see how you develop this.

Pretty interesting, the way you've done this. I assume this takes place in the first season, seeing as though Chumley is present? Anyway, great job, really good premise. I've read alot of stories with Jaden having a sibling (or siblings in some cases) but they're not nearly as well written as this. I'd love to see how you develop this.