for Naruto Shippuden: Namikaze's Return Redux!1/9 c2 
1bleachorange
Yeah, I am bowing out here. The actual writing is fine, but the plot sucks, and the story is going in a direction I think makes no sense.
1bleachorangeYeah, I am bowing out here. The actual writing is fine, but the plot sucks, and the story is going in a direction I think makes no sense.
1/9 c1 bleachorange
Pfffffffffft! Does his sword dance and sing as well? What a fucking dumb thing. Hey, lets make the most capable sword in Naruto be made by a kid whos barely started seal work and hasnt used a sword before a few months ago and knows nothing of smithing! Get real. I'm going to do the author a solid and ignore the existence of this sword if I can, as the story is doing most things well at this point.
Wait, what? Jiraiya is there to guard Naruto against Akatsuki! Wtf is this nonsense storyline? If you need an excuse to have your character go seduce mei or something, come up with a better one ffs. This is ridiculous. Tsunade would not approve this and jiraiya wouldnt risk it. We as the audience know that Akatsuki is the reason for the blood mist to begin with, and I cant think of a reason Tsunade would risk her last living blood relation, the jinchuuriki for the village, in a foreign civil war with no team to back him up and no Jiraiya to protect him from S class ninja that they know are hunting him. This is stupid.
Pfffffffffft! Does his sword dance and sing as well? What a fucking dumb thing. Hey, lets make the most capable sword in Naruto be made by a kid whos barely started seal work and hasnt used a sword before a few months ago and knows nothing of smithing! Get real. I'm going to do the author a solid and ignore the existence of this sword if I can, as the story is doing most things well at this point.
Wait, what? Jiraiya is there to guard Naruto against Akatsuki! Wtf is this nonsense storyline? If you need an excuse to have your character go seduce mei or something, come up with a better one ffs. This is ridiculous. Tsunade would not approve this and jiraiya wouldnt risk it. We as the audience know that Akatsuki is the reason for the blood mist to begin with, and I cant think of a reason Tsunade would risk her last living blood relation, the jinchuuriki for the village, in a foreign civil war with no team to back him up and no Jiraiya to protect him from S class ninja that they know are hunting him. This is stupid.
12/28/2024 c19 12MacMan3679
Sage-mode would be perfect when used in conjunction with Arashiton. It allows Naruto to be at one with Nature, which would make his Storm Release that much more powerful.
12MacMan3679Sage-mode would be perfect when used in conjunction with Arashiton. It allows Naruto to be at one with Nature, which would make his Storm Release that much more powerful.
12/27/2024 c8 MacMan3679
I think the best thing for Naruto's progression is for him to begin his Sage training. He was able to defeat Pein in canon while he was in Sage mode, with his skill-level in this story, plus being a Toad Sage, Naruto could hand Nagato his ass.
I think the best thing for Naruto's progression is for him to begin his Sage training. He was able to defeat Pein in canon while he was in Sage mode, with his skill-level in this story, plus being a Toad Sage, Naruto could hand Nagato his ass.
12/26/2024 c6 MacMan3679
I don’t like the way you wrote the Raiga section. He was burying people alive, and just because he was taking care of some ‘poor orphan boy’ he’s going to get off scot-free? At the very least he should have had his chakra sealed and thrown in prison for the rest of his life. The people of that mine deserved justice!
I don’t like the way you wrote the Raiga section. He was burying people alive, and just because he was taking care of some ‘poor orphan boy’ he’s going to get off scot-free? At the very least he should have had his chakra sealed and thrown in prison for the rest of his life. The people of that mine deserved justice!
12/19/2024 c8 Guest
I really can't go on
did you really have to degrade all the characters in the verse?
Tsunade blushes and drools over her grandson? really this is more of a lemon than a mature fiction
I really can't go on
did you really have to degrade all the characters in the verse?
Tsunade blushes and drools over her grandson? really this is more of a lemon than a mature fiction
12/19/2024 c5 Guest
I really force myself to read a lot and I would like to tell you that honestly you forced the romance and sex so much that a good work with a lot of potential became almost disgusting.
I really force myself to read a lot and I would like to tell you that honestly you forced the romance and sex so much that a good work with a lot of potential became almost disgusting.
12/3/2024 c35 oldpotato
The quality of the plot kinda dropped of a cliff after the Kumo invasion arc, but you seem to already acknowledge that in your author's notes.
It's respectable that you decided to finish this story despite having clearly lost interest and motivation for it years ago. The writing style itself was good, and even though the plot felt like that art class meme with the horse about the 90/10% effort levels, it was still mostly enjoyable to read.
The quality of the plot kinda dropped of a cliff after the Kumo invasion arc, but you seem to already acknowledge that in your author's notes.
It's respectable that you decided to finish this story despite having clearly lost interest and motivation for it years ago. The writing style itself was good, and even though the plot felt like that art class meme with the horse about the 90/10% effort levels, it was still mostly enjoyable to read.
11/25/2024 c35 Guest
So Naruto, despite being with these women, and having kids with them. Doesn't live with them or see/spend time with them or his kids that often? That's just dumb and lame. The fuck is the point of them even being together then?
So Naruto, despite being with these women, and having kids with them. Doesn't live with them or see/spend time with them or his kids that often? That's just dumb and lame. The fuck is the point of them even being together then?
11/25/2024 c33 Guest
How is mei able to outlast yugito?
Yugito always had more stamina than Mei.
Yugito doesn't have small tits. They're d cups in this. That's not small. Lol
Hell even amongst his women she has, arguably, the second largest pair. Konan has smaller and so does koyuki. Yugao might have smaller.
How is mei able to outlast yugito?
Yugito always had more stamina than Mei.
Yugito doesn't have small tits. They're d cups in this. That's not small. Lol
Hell even amongst his women she has, arguably, the second largest pair. Konan has smaller and so does koyuki. Yugao might have smaller.
11/25/2024 c32 Guest
I don't think Preta path can absorb biju chakra
I don't think Preta path can absorb biju chakra
11/25/2024 c31 Guest
Tsunade is an idiot. If Tobi were Madara, then he'd easily be able to take on several kage levek shinobi.
Tsunade is an idiot. If Tobi were Madara, then he'd easily be able to take on several kage levek shinobi.
11/25/2024 c30 Guest
Danzo isn't a patriot. He's just a power hungry fool with a god complex and thinks he knows best.
Hell Akatsuki is what they are because of him, indirectly.
Though Yugao was Neko?
Danzo isn't a patriot. He's just a power hungry fool with a god complex and thinks he knows best.
Hell Akatsuki is what they are because of him, indirectly.
Though Yugao was Neko?
11/25/2024 c27 Guest
Nah, Naruto understands more than they could think.
Rikudo Sennin isn't a god. Nor does he possess the power of one. Lmfao
Nah, Naruto understands more than they could think.
Rikudo Sennin isn't a god. Nor does he possess the power of one. Lmfao
11/25/2024 c26 Guest
Tsunade and Naruto were already related through the Uzumaki clan and blood. Tsunade also already knew this.
Tsunade and Naruto were already related through the Uzumaki clan and blood. Tsunade also already knew this.