for To Love And To Lose That Love8/11/2011 c1 
9Elsebeth Kindri
I was so disappointed when they didn't give Alistair a bigger fole in Dragon Age 2. Maybe he should have found true love with the character we get to play as instead of going off to be king or a drunkard... (or whatever depending on how you play). He's such a cutie with his innocence and stuff!
Anyways, I really love the short story. It's well written and I think it reflects who Alistair is.
9Elsebeth KindriI was so disappointed when they didn't give Alistair a bigger fole in Dragon Age 2. Maybe he should have found true love with the character we get to play as instead of going off to be king or a drunkard... (or whatever depending on how you play). He's such a cutie with his innocence and stuff!
Anyways, I really love the short story. It's well written and I think it reflects who Alistair is.
9/15/2010 c1 8lisakodysam
I like this, you write what you want to write in a clear and simple way without it becoming too mushy or overwrought.
Very nicely done :)
8lisakodysamI like this, you write what you want to write in a clear and simple way without it becoming too mushy or overwrought.
Very nicely done :)
9/3/2010 c1 3Katalini
Aw! I loved how it ended, when he named his daughter after his only love! Well done, keep it up :)
3KataliniAw! I loved how it ended, when he named his daughter after his only love! Well done, keep it up :)
8/12/2010 c1 CameliaMaeve
Posting here because it's my favorite of your work so far. I'd love to read more from you because this is definitely better than your other stories. I still think you have serious potential. You should consider taking a creative writing class. (jahd4);)
Posting here because it's my favorite of your work so far. I'd love to read more from you because this is definitely better than your other stories. I still think you have serious potential. You should consider taking a creative writing class. (jahd4);)
8/10/2010 c1 not a fan of dragon age P
For a person that doesn't like dragon age this story is actually pretty good. I think it is only because the writer of this story is my best friend/sister. I hope she keeps writing them and lets me read them because they are really good in my opinion :)
For a person that doesn't like dragon age this story is actually pretty good. I think it is only because the writer of this story is my best friend/sister. I hope she keeps writing them and lets me read them because they are really good in my opinion :)
8/10/2010 c1 fanfictonfan
your story is so sweet! I love it! The last bit when he names his daughter after her! and when you talk about his wife and how he only has one love! OMG its so good! I will be sure to look at you other stories!
your story is so sweet! I love it! The last bit when he names his daughter after her! and when you talk about his wife and how he only has one love! OMG its so good! I will be sure to look at you other stories!
8/10/2010 c1 4Violet Theirin
Beautifully done sweetheart! You should have warned me that I would need tissues. The end bit, where he named his daughter after her was such a beautiful sentiment. Very good and keep up the good work!
4Violet TheirinBeautifully done sweetheart! You should have warned me that I would need tissues. The end bit, where he named his daughter after her was such a beautiful sentiment. Very good and keep up the good work!