
7/1/2014 c4
8Talkingbirdguy
Even though I stopped on gen 4, and never got into gen 5, I think that this could really work out and be a good story. Update soon, please!

Even though I stopped on gen 4, and never got into gen 5, I think that this could really work out and be a good story. Update soon, please!
7/18/2012 c4
5Prince Gray
Damn, this story has a hell of a cliffhanger. I wonder how they would've gotten past Scolipede and I know Tyler would have found his way past the Liepard. I assume the Oshawott he finds, is the same one that became Samurott. Alright, I'm going to get started on the one-shot battle and send it to you when I'm done. Til then!

Damn, this story has a hell of a cliffhanger. I wonder how they would've gotten past Scolipede and I know Tyler would have found his way past the Liepard. I assume the Oshawott he finds, is the same one that became Samurott. Alright, I'm going to get started on the one-shot battle and send it to you when I'm done. Til then!
7/18/2012 c2 Prince Gray
Looking at this in hindsight this guy could be part of Neo Team Plasma but what would they want with a Minccino? lol Tyler kicked him in the face, reminds me of a certain book owner...
Looking at this in hindsight this guy could be part of Neo Team Plasma but what would they want with a Minccino? lol Tyler kicked him in the face, reminds me of a certain book owner...
1/17/2011 c4
3stevethemime
Very good chapter, an excellent way to get back into the swing of things. I like this story a lot, so keep it up! You've really improved as a writer, like, astronomically man, it's great to see your work just keep getting better.
Good luck, and have fun!
Mime out.

Very good chapter, an excellent way to get back into the swing of things. I like this story a lot, so keep it up! You've really improved as a writer, like, astronomically man, it's great to see your work just keep getting better.
Good luck, and have fun!
Mime out.
8/12/2010 c3 stevethemime
This is an exciting story, and I'm glad that the fifth generation hasn't come out yet because that gives me some time to study :D Anyway good chapter and I hope you learn about v generation soon, but if not, you can just keep working on Jyan (hint hint)
Good luck, and have fun!
Mime out.
This is an exciting story, and I'm glad that the fifth generation hasn't come out yet because that gives me some time to study :D Anyway good chapter and I hope you learn about v generation soon, but if not, you can just keep working on Jyan (hint hint)
Good luck, and have fun!
Mime out.
8/10/2010 c2 stevethemime
I like this story, it makes me laugh, especially when people in a pokemon story wear :D Though I must say, I can't read this story without looking up each and every single new pokemon. Ah well, small sacrifice to make. Keep up the good work!
Good luck, and have fun!
Mime out.
I like this story, it makes me laugh, especially when people in a pokemon story wear :D Though I must say, I can't read this story without looking up each and every single new pokemon. Ah well, small sacrifice to make. Keep up the good work!
Good luck, and have fun!
Mime out.
8/10/2010 c1 stevethemime
First!
Wow, it's been so long since I've watched anything to do with pokemon... I didn't even know about the second generation! I'll have to study up I guess...
Anyway nice first chapter, I'll be waiting for more of your updates :)
Good luck, and, well, you know how this goes by now :)
Mime out.
First!
Wow, it's been so long since I've watched anything to do with pokemon... I didn't even know about the second generation! I'll have to study up I guess...
Anyway nice first chapter, I'll be waiting for more of your updates :)
Good luck, and, well, you know how this goes by now :)
Mime out.