for The Story of the Seven9/16/2010 c1 
9worthlesswbu
I liked the way you desribed the cabins and kids and everything! It was great! Can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon!
9worthlesswbuI liked the way you desribed the cabins and kids and everything! It was great! Can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon!
8/10/2010 c1 4insert meaningful phrase here
It's...bearable. There's definitely some naivety to the writing style, and the "reviewing your own story" is just a little bit needy.
Correction on a couple of your Gods:
1) Morpheus is the God of Dreams. You said so yourself. His kids, I'd imagine, wouldn't put people to sleep; they'd influence their dreams. Reason? Hypnos is the Greek God of sleep. Morpheus' kids would therefore be stealing his kids powers. I know the whole Manhattan thing, but remember that demigods only get the powers toned down slightly.
2) Aeolus, contrary to popular belief, is not the God of the Winds. He's the King of the Winds. The Anemoi are the Gods (yes, there's more than one) of the Winds.
3) Moirae is not one goddess. The Moirae, more commonly known as the Fates, are three goddesses; Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos. They each have separate powers and niches. They're mentioned in the Lightning Thief.
4) Hecate's also the Goddess of Crossroads. Also, she's a virgin goddess, although some sources say that she may be the mother of Scylla. Basically, it's extremely unlikely that she's have kids.
If you need help, I'm available. PM me if you need clarification.
4insert meaningful phrase hereIt's...bearable. There's definitely some naivety to the writing style, and the "reviewing your own story" is just a little bit needy.
Correction on a couple of your Gods:
1) Morpheus is the God of Dreams. You said so yourself. His kids, I'd imagine, wouldn't put people to sleep; they'd influence their dreams. Reason? Hypnos is the Greek God of sleep. Morpheus' kids would therefore be stealing his kids powers. I know the whole Manhattan thing, but remember that demigods only get the powers toned down slightly.
2) Aeolus, contrary to popular belief, is not the God of the Winds. He's the King of the Winds. The Anemoi are the Gods (yes, there's more than one) of the Winds.
3) Moirae is not one goddess. The Moirae, more commonly known as the Fates, are three goddesses; Clotho, Lachesis, and Atropos. They each have separate powers and niches. They're mentioned in the Lightning Thief.
4) Hecate's also the Goddess of Crossroads. Also, she's a virgin goddess, although some sources say that she may be the mother of Scylla. Basically, it's extremely unlikely that she's have kids.
If you need help, I'm available. PM me if you need clarification.
8/10/2010 c1 T s wolff
READ THIS STORY PEOPLE!
READ THIS STORY PEOPLE!