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5/5/2016 c16 Guest
I think he should snap out just before he attacks Jigglypuff so he doesn't attack her but almost did.
10/3/2012 c1 LittleMissFish
You can squirtle on my jiggly puffs anyday
8/31/2012 c16 Guest
8/23/2012 c16 Seeker Heart
Oh my lord. What happen to the one name Tyrai? Did Jigglypuff made the shot? I hope they got...never mind. Anyways, good luck with the next chp.
6/12/2012 c15 Ashes of Chaos
Wow... Long enough cliffhanger much?

Anyways, this is a great story! I 'ope that ya will be updatin' soon!
7/6/2011 c15 Guest
4/9/2011 c15 Purinblood
arent you going to continue this? its so good!
12/31/2010 c15 1Lady Death 16
Oh, crap... Seriously, though. You should have more reviews than this.
12/31/2010 c3 3KingCouch
Gasp, a random girl! Hehe, just kidding. But GRRR, you cut off the end of the flashback. And hehe, Kirby swallowed Meta Knight. XD And I bet that random woman is Rosie.

I will get to reviewing the rest of the story later... I must go. So, buhbye for now, I guess. :D
12/31/2010 c2 KingCouch
Oh, umm, I'd like to point out that the centered text is pretty annoying. Can you fix it, please? :D

Yay for the second chapter! Gosh, why is Meta Knight being so mean? :( ANyways, yup, you have the same kind of dialog mistakes.

"Call me Miss, I can embarrass you." She said... should be:

"Call me Miss; I can embarrass you," she said...

And then you have the same kind of problem another dialog, that becomes corrected as:

"Okay then Jigglypuff,," he snarled.

Will keep readin' now. Heheh...
12/31/2010 c1 KingCouch
I love MetaxJiggly, so I will definitely read this story. :D

I like this so far, but you have some mistakes in your dialog, like...

"Go ahead." I said as sweetly as I could manage. - Yeah, you can't have a period and then a speech tag.

It should be "Go ahead," I said as sweetly as I could manage.

"Do I threaten you?" He asked in a way that demanded an answer. - Just make "He" lowercase.

"Do I threaten you?" he asked in a way that demanded an answer.

I will continue reading now. :D
12/31/2010 c15 21Berrikins
I found this chapter very effective in progressing the plot since you wrote what the villains had in mind for a plan and using Tyrai to carry it out. I noticed at the beginning when you wrote all that dialogue, it lacked some description to set more of a mood. I would advise putting in a little more detail when writing your next updates. With that being said, I look forward to your next chapter.
12/23/2010 c13 1Lady Death 16
Yeow... Whatever you do, don't stop making this fanfic. Cuz This. Is. AWESOME!
12/7/2010 c4 7Zelda-rox12
oh man, he is a vampire (not really, but close enough).

12/7/2010 c1 Zelda-rox12
lol its funny that Jigglypuff thinks MetaKnight's a vampire...
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