12/23/2014 c1 meeshy
ok Naruto is a total creep in this story, its actually really creepy. I just imagine him with this pedophile voice. he's coming on way to strong;to the point where its unattractive and scary.
ok Naruto is a total creep in this story, its actually really creepy. I just imagine him with this pedophile voice. he's coming on way to strong;to the point where its unattractive and scary.
4/14/2013 c1 Guest
sound like a great story but i couldn't help laughing when you put that he signed out an application for walmart that was sooooooo funny!
sound like a great story but i couldn't help laughing when you put that he signed out an application for walmart that was sooooooo funny!
2/22/2013 c3 Keyvies
(And where the fuck did this corner come from?) - favorite line from this chapter. The dialogue between Naruto and Sasuke is great, it's the best part..._〆(・・@)
(And where the fuck did this corner come from?) - favorite line from this chapter. The dialogue between Naruto and Sasuke is great, it's the best part..._〆(・・@)
2/22/2013 c1 Keyvies
"I see you think your ass is sexy too." He said while smirking. (you have some of the greatest one liners!) (ノ)ノ
"I see you think your ass is sexy too." He said while smirking. (you have some of the greatest one liners!) (ノ)ノ
11/24/2012 c1 Guest
Wtf bitch! You made Naruto a creeper! Not cool
Wtf bitch! You made Naruto a creeper! Not cool
7/3/2012 c4 Guest
CONTINUE! LOVE IT :p
CONTINUE! LOVE IT :p
5/25/2011 c4 10lil joker 1989
This was a nice but I should mention that you took Naruto's boxers off twice
This was a nice but I should mention that you took Naruto's boxers off twice