for we are family5/20/2013 c1 
6Emmy 1995
Two questions you said in the story he knew she had enough how did he two what did jasper mean by you were not asleep this time
I also want it longer if u won't can I make it longer you can even have the credit if that is what u r worried about
6Emmy 1995Two questions you said in the story he knew she had enough how did he two what did jasper mean by you were not asleep this time
I also want it longer if u won't can I make it longer you can even have the credit if that is what u r worried about
5/27/2012 c1 1Underastarrysky
It would have been a great story, but I had trouble readingit for the grammar and runons.
1UnderastarryskyIt would have been a great story, but I had trouble readingit for the grammar and runons.
8/11/2010 c1 Two Ghosts in One Mirror
Perhaps next time you should read your story (gasp!) before you put it up on the site, hmm? Your punctuation skills are dreadful, as is your grasp of subject-verb agreement, and spelling. Never mind that the premise of the story was really not worth the tiny amount of effort you put into it. Now, before you get "feed up" with this review, please do explain what "he knows the scary side of mine has taken some of the scary side but knows I'm not being slightly scary in our book to others yes" is supposed to mean?
Yours,
Ghost
(Eins)
Perhaps next time you should read your story (gasp!) before you put it up on the site, hmm? Your punctuation skills are dreadful, as is your grasp of subject-verb agreement, and spelling. Never mind that the premise of the story was really not worth the tiny amount of effort you put into it. Now, before you get "feed up" with this review, please do explain what "he knows the scary side of mine has taken some of the scary side but knows I'm not being slightly scary in our book to others yes" is supposed to mean?
Yours,
Ghost
(Eins)
8/11/2010 c1 lynne0731
loved it! my brother always stood back to make sure i kicked the shit out them and no one got in.
loved it! my brother always stood back to make sure i kicked the shit out them and no one got in.