for Snippets10/30/2010 c5 
18Winterluna
Cute! I don't think anyone would ever have thought of that!
But I was expecting some sort of fluff for my favorite pairing from you. Oh, well.
Overall for this challenge, the only one that I really didn't like was the Myrtle one because it just wasn't right. I like how you expressed it, but it was a ridiculous pairing!
Well done and congratulations on finishing it!
-Winterluna
18WinterlunaCute! I don't think anyone would ever have thought of that!
But I was expecting some sort of fluff for my favorite pairing from you. Oh, well.
Overall for this challenge, the only one that I really didn't like was the Myrtle one because it just wasn't right. I like how you expressed it, but it was a ridiculous pairing!
Well done and congratulations on finishing it!
-Winterluna
10/30/2010 c4 Winterluna
I said no ridiculousness! It was nice for unrequited, but not for this story. I did like how you included actual quotes. Be careful to make sure they're correct.
-Winterluna
I said no ridiculousness! It was nice for unrequited, but not for this story. I did like how you included actual quotes. Be careful to make sure they're correct.
-Winterluna
10/30/2010 c3 Winterluna
I'm surprised, knowing how well you write and create slash, that you didn't do so well on the love part of it. You more described a summer than love for a person. Luckily for you, it was there even small-ly.
-Winterluna
I'm surprised, knowing how well you write and create slash, that you didn't do so well on the love part of it. You more described a summer than love for a person. Luckily for you, it was there even small-ly.
-Winterluna
10/30/2010 c2 Winterluna
This is the exact reason why I didn't make it canon! Great job on the Luna/Neville. Nice imagery, even if you didn't intend it.
-Winterluna
This is the exact reason why I didn't make it canon! Great job on the Luna/Neville. Nice imagery, even if you didn't intend it.
-Winterluna
10/30/2010 c1 Winterluna
Hm. Interesting. I find that, yes, you would start off with the snarkiest relationship in HP. (Yes, I know it's not a word.)
Well done.
Winterluna
Hm. Interesting. I find that, yes, you would start off with the snarkiest relationship in HP. (Yes, I know it's not a word.)
Well done.
Winterluna