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12/18/2010 c13 Delete. Yea
Sorry, I didn't get how Naruto, or his parents go back to the past and what about the Kyuubi?

Apart from that, I liked the ending :)

Looking forward to new stories by you.
12/18/2010 c13 4Oppressed Madness
I was liking this story but the ending turned me off. It's so sloppy and confusing. There are so many unanswered questions like how did the fight with Naruto and Sasuke end? Did the presence of the future Konoha shinobis affect the timeline in anyway? If they did, how? Was Naruto and his friends able to prevent some of the events in the normal timeline, such as the sealing of the Kyuubi, from happening?

I wish you had at least shown the fight between Naruto and Sasuke, I was looking forward to that. Especially the reaction of Naruto's and Sasuke's parents when they find out how strong their children are and why they're fighting.

I really wasn't expecting this story to end so soon.
12/18/2010 c13 2InactiveAccountMay27th
Hmm... I don't get this chapter at all...

It's too confusing and all...

I liked it though.

Well, I would love to read more stories from you in the future. Good luck on your other stories!

~Karishiana
12/18/2010 c13 24nine-orcids
oh my gosh, you are so awesome! this story is one of the best time travel i've ever read! i loved it! also, the ending was pretty funny!
12/18/2010 c13 9XMinatoXKyuubiX
Great story! (claps) wonderful. :)
12/18/2010 c13 Frostius
nice chapter
12/18/2010 c13 4KagomeGirl021
ok that seemed like a happy ending but it was so confusing. explain what happened better. like why are naruto's parents still alive? did they go back to the present? was the future changed massively or just a tiny bit? so many questions unanswered.
12/17/2010 c13 MugetsuIchigo
the ending was not bad! XD
12/17/2010 c13 12Crystalzap
on come on! I don't get it what happened to Sasuke? why are his parents still alive? what about the Kyuubi? and how in the hell did they get back to their own time? ...troublesome...
12/17/2010 c12 53Hokee
PLEASE UPDATE! i really want to know who one and what everyone was thinking as they looped at the sand eye and naruto destroyed it! please continue.
12/17/2010 c12 tez-chan
Thank you so much for update and good luck for next chapter ^_^
12/16/2010 c12 1Jezebel Kairiese Amikaze
omg plese please please put up the last chapter(s) ill die if you dont! i love this story sooo much! but i have a question...is naruto really with Itachi? if not is he in love with anyone else? if so who?
12/15/2010 c1 4Hero Of The Hazard
[All were congratulating the Yondaime, telling him things they normally wouldn't say, possibly because they were drunk.]

...

-Slaps forehead-

Of course.
12/15/2010 c12 3Muffin Mark
ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!

What I think happened is that Naruto won that clash, but at the cost of his arm and thus ninja career. There is no way that I can think of that Sasuke could survive that clash without Madara-level haxxing. As a second alternative, both died, and Nagato finds Naruto's body and uses it as one of the Paths of Pain.
12/14/2010 c3 3Shugopop
I like it!
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