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11/2/2022 c14 Guest
Good story, but lack of plot. Also a really abrupt ending that kinda left me going, “…what?”.
6/6/2022 c13 aberle82
I like the cheesy, 'Let me move on' stuff. I've personally had a dream or two that could be considered a visitation. And even if it's just one's own subconscious doing it, if it's for the best and gets the job done, isn't that what matters?
8/6/2019 c3 Guest
Ichigo is pathetic.
9/4/2017 c14 10piratequeen24
I may have read this years ago, but I'm so glad I (re?)read it!
I love how you create characters that go through real-life, serious issues, but still find a balance of keeping it light, funny-at-times and captivating. Thanks for another great story :)
8/18/2017 c14 2Kizack
Yay! They finally got a happy ending!

(I'm still rooting for Ishida & Hirako... :3)
11/4/2016 c14 alicia.jen.havens
I wished that you wrapped shuhei and gin a bit more. The story was excellent other then that loose end.
7/26/2016 c6 3MoonIllusion
Dafuq Ichigo
4/27/2016 c14 11I am the Color of Boom
Awwwww. That, that was perfect. The Gin and Shuhei was strong, Grimmjow and Ichigo were just too hot and cute. So cute. I loved all of the friendships, the car talk, and Ichigo's work, it was something you could really relax into right along with him. hah. Ending a story (in my opinion) is really hard to do without making it seem anti-climactic or disappointing almost. But this was executed just right.

Loved this story.
4/27/2016 c13 I am the Color of Boom
Ah, I really liked this. It was quiet, and heart tugging, and it felt like it needed to happen, must've been why you wrote it up to begin with. :) Also, a rejection letter doesn't mean you can't do it, just means you can't do it right yet. Give it time, keep trying, you'll get there!
4/27/2016 c11 I am the Color of Boom
Hahahahaha! *squeals*
4/11/2016 c4 arruminati
Damn Shinji "I'd let that pirate shiver me timbers" Jesus
4/2/2016 c14 7bleeb90
I loved it.
3/9/2016 c14 Guest
I don't see how Street racing cars and gayness goes together, whoo-men should be playing dress up mannequins
3/9/2016 c7 alicia.jen.havens
Your note summed it all up. It was WTF FABULOUS!
2/22/2016 c14 1PleiadesWolfe
This story was good but I hate these kinds of endings. The story is building you up and up and then it just ends. And now I'm yelling "that can be it! Where's the rest of it?!"
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