
11/2/2022 c14 Guest
Good story, but lack of plot. Also a really abrupt ending that kinda left me going, “…what?”.
Good story, but lack of plot. Also a really abrupt ending that kinda left me going, “…what?”.
6/6/2022 c13 aberle82
I like the cheesy, 'Let me move on' stuff. I've personally had a dream or two that could be considered a visitation. And even if it's just one's own subconscious doing it, if it's for the best and gets the job done, isn't that what matters?
I like the cheesy, 'Let me move on' stuff. I've personally had a dream or two that could be considered a visitation. And even if it's just one's own subconscious doing it, if it's for the best and gets the job done, isn't that what matters?
8/6/2019 c3 Guest
Ichigo is pathetic.
Ichigo is pathetic.
9/4/2017 c14
10piratequeen24
I may have read this years ago, but I'm so glad I (re?)read it!
I love how you create characters that go through real-life, serious issues, but still find a balance of keeping it light, funny-at-times and captivating. Thanks for another great story :)

I may have read this years ago, but I'm so glad I (re?)read it!
I love how you create characters that go through real-life, serious issues, but still find a balance of keeping it light, funny-at-times and captivating. Thanks for another great story :)
8/18/2017 c14
2Kizack
Yay! They finally got a happy ending!
(I'm still rooting for Ishida & Hirako... :3)

Yay! They finally got a happy ending!
(I'm still rooting for Ishida & Hirako... :3)
11/4/2016 c14 alicia.jen.havens
I wished that you wrapped shuhei and gin a bit more. The story was excellent other then that loose end.
I wished that you wrapped shuhei and gin a bit more. The story was excellent other then that loose end.
4/27/2016 c14
11I am the Color of Boom
Awwwww. That, that was perfect. The Gin and Shuhei was strong, Grimmjow and Ichigo were just too hot and cute. So cute. I loved all of the friendships, the car talk, and Ichigo's work, it was something you could really relax into right along with him. hah. Ending a story (in my opinion) is really hard to do without making it seem anti-climactic or disappointing almost. But this was executed just right.
Loved this story.

Awwwww. That, that was perfect. The Gin and Shuhei was strong, Grimmjow and Ichigo were just too hot and cute. So cute. I loved all of the friendships, the car talk, and Ichigo's work, it was something you could really relax into right along with him. hah. Ending a story (in my opinion) is really hard to do without making it seem anti-climactic or disappointing almost. But this was executed just right.
Loved this story.
4/27/2016 c13 I am the Color of Boom
Ah, I really liked this. It was quiet, and heart tugging, and it felt like it needed to happen, must've been why you wrote it up to begin with. :) Also, a rejection letter doesn't mean you can't do it, just means you can't do it right yet. Give it time, keep trying, you'll get there!
Ah, I really liked this. It was quiet, and heart tugging, and it felt like it needed to happen, must've been why you wrote it up to begin with. :) Also, a rejection letter doesn't mean you can't do it, just means you can't do it right yet. Give it time, keep trying, you'll get there!
3/9/2016 c14 Guest
I don't see how Street racing cars and gayness goes together, whoo-men should be playing dress up mannequins
I don't see how Street racing cars and gayness goes together, whoo-men should be playing dress up mannequins
2/22/2016 c14
1PleiadesWolfe
This story was good but I hate these kinds of endings. The story is building you up and up and then it just ends. And now I'm yelling "that can be it! Where's the rest of it?!"

This story was good but I hate these kinds of endings. The story is building you up and up and then it just ends. And now I'm yelling "that can be it! Where's the rest of it?!"