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12/6/2020 c1 381JanetM74
I love this!
12/16/2018 c1 Violet
You never focus too much on character portrayal. That's what makes your stories so good.
12/28/2017 c1 Guest
I quite like this new style of writing. But as u mentioned, you did go a little overboard with the descriptive part of things. Maybe next time just turn it down a notch so your readers won't feel the urge to skip ahead.
4/13/2014 c1 Rhyming Reason
This is very well written. I loved the characters and the plot and you wrote in the humor extremely well which can be tricky to do. In response to your fears you didn't bore me and I don't think your plot suffered at all. Fantastic one-shot!
2/16/2013 c1 LiseLore
Aw, this was great ! Loved it ! Always good to see Scott giving advice ! :D
7/21/2012 c1 Guest
just 2 let u know ur summeries need to be more intresting i almost past it untill i looked at the title
10/5/2011 c1 a frenchy
Please please please please please please...it's almost a year now :( Can you update again your beautiful and wonderful story "smothered by your brothers", I so want to read it again ;))

Thank you very much and don't forget us ! Bisou XXDDD
3/6/2011 c1 BlueRosemary
Just wanted to write and let you know how much i am enjoyed this story and all the others ones you have posted. I really like the way your stories are centred around the tracies as a family. I can wait to read what you right next. Will you be reposting the stories you have taken down any time soon as i would love to read them. Thanks
2/4/2011 c1 5hbruce
anh! *sigh*

I love how you wrote Scott and Alan in this. The brotherly love and counselling was very cute. I also love how nervous Alan was about getting engaged- it's very endearing.

I hope you return with something new soon.
9/5/2010 c1 53Jimmy Candlestick
So, for some reason, when this arrived in my inbox, I read that it had 18,000 words...so, I put it off. And then I looked at it again. It's all good. I was actually a little surprised how easily I was able to read it at this length. I'm not used to this big a word count in a one-shot. So, congratulations, you kept my attention. :)

I thought it was all good. I didn't feel like it was much different from your normal writing style, if different at all. Just...less whump-ish. Haha! It was really sweet, but not too fluffy. *shrugs* I mean, if it was really choice a or choice b, it'd only be because it was part of a multi-chapter fic, and needing to move along. But, for this, it was fine.
8/24/2010 c1 Caped Hero
Hey! I've reviewed your fic before under "Inkbug". But - it's SO GOOD to see you writing Thunderbirds fic again! I really enjoyed this piece, even if it was different from your usual writing. The conversation between Alan and Scott was perfect in the way everything just sort of lined up.

I really enjoyed this, it's just the kind of fic I need right before heading off to get some sleep. Wonderful job!
8/23/2010 c1 14ayjaydee
Ohhhhh, I just love this story! Absolutely adorable are the first words that spring to mind. Very well done.

As for the way you wrote it, I find no fault other than it may have been just the tiniest bit over-discriptive where the hot chocolate was concerned. Other than that I think it was beautiful. :)

I adore Scott and Alan stories because of their unique relationship and this was perfect characterization. So thanks for that! (Especially the part at the end about the "missing" brownies, haha)
8/19/2010 c1 rose
I never have the occasion to make a review because I just discover your stories, but I just want to tell you how great they are. You are a incredible writer ! I love how you describe the characters, their emotions, their thoughts, everythings with such a depth.

What I prefer the most is all the love, hurt/comfort (love Alan whump lol), the family fluff especially the brotherly love or even jeff with the boys (... Anyway, I just hope that you will still spoil us with your fictions and keep doing this great job... Good luck with college !

(I dont know if it's very clear, sorry for my english, i'm french and to write english is not as easy as to understand... bisou)
8/19/2010 c1 21Cip
LOVED IT! (don't I always?)

The style was, admittedly, different, but I really enjoyed it. The amount of detail painted the picture perfectly - although there were cases when I wondered if there was a simpler way of putting what you'd said whilst still keeping the same meaning. Sorry!

I absolutely squeeed when he got the ring out - I think they could hear me all the way in Australia! You know, you should really write an original story and get it published. You have such a wonderful individual style and way of portraying what the characters are thinking, it would be a shame if you didn't make the most of such a wonderful gift :D

And a hug to Tin-tin in this story ^_^

Cip

xoxox
8/19/2010 c1 4Once.A.Queen.Of.Narnia
I've always loved reading your stuff because you seem to connect with the Tracys and your own characters so well! I really feel like I'm standing there with them every time I read!

One suggestion: Can we maybe have a little more Gordon whump? He might be my fave but he needs some whump attention too! xD
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