for Advice and Marshmallows12/16/2018 c1 Violet
You never focus too much on character portrayal. That's what makes your stories so good.
You never focus too much on character portrayal. That's what makes your stories so good.
12/28/2017 c1 Guest
I quite like this new style of writing. But as u mentioned, you did go a little overboard with the descriptive part of things. Maybe next time just turn it down a notch so your readers won't feel the urge to skip ahead.
I quite like this new style of writing. But as u mentioned, you did go a little overboard with the descriptive part of things. Maybe next time just turn it down a notch so your readers won't feel the urge to skip ahead.
4/13/2014 c1 Rhyming Reason
This is very well written. I loved the characters and the plot and you wrote in the humor extremely well which can be tricky to do. In response to your fears you didn't bore me and I don't think your plot suffered at all. Fantastic one-shot!
This is very well written. I loved the characters and the plot and you wrote in the humor extremely well which can be tricky to do. In response to your fears you didn't bore me and I don't think your plot suffered at all. Fantastic one-shot!
7/21/2012 c1 Guest
just 2 let u know ur summeries need to be more intresting i almost past it untill i looked at the title
just 2 let u know ur summeries need to be more intresting i almost past it untill i looked at the title
10/5/2011 c1 a frenchy
Please please please please please please...it's almost a year now :( Can you update again your beautiful and wonderful story "smothered by your brothers", I so want to read it again ;))
Thank you very much and don't forget us ! Bisou XXDDD
Please please please please please please...it's almost a year now :( Can you update again your beautiful and wonderful story "smothered by your brothers", I so want to read it again ;))
Thank you very much and don't forget us ! Bisou XXDDD
3/6/2011 c1 BlueRosemary
Just wanted to write and let you know how much i am enjoyed this story and all the others ones you have posted. I really like the way your stories are centred around the tracies as a family. I can wait to read what you right next. Will you be reposting the stories you have taken down any time soon as i would love to read them. Thanks
Just wanted to write and let you know how much i am enjoyed this story and all the others ones you have posted. I really like the way your stories are centred around the tracies as a family. I can wait to read what you right next. Will you be reposting the stories you have taken down any time soon as i would love to read them. Thanks
2/4/2011 c1 
5hbruce
anh! *sigh*
I love how you wrote Scott and Alan in this. The brotherly love and counselling was very cute. I also love how nervous Alan was about getting engaged- it's very endearing.
I hope you return with something new soon.
5hbruceanh! *sigh*
I love how you wrote Scott and Alan in this. The brotherly love and counselling was very cute. I also love how nervous Alan was about getting engaged- it's very endearing.
I hope you return with something new soon.
9/5/2010 c1 53Jimmy Candlestick
So, for some reason, when this arrived in my inbox, I read that it had 18,000 words...so, I put it off. And then I looked at it again. It's all good. I was actually a little surprised how easily I was able to read it at this length. I'm not used to this big a word count in a one-shot. So, congratulations, you kept my attention. :)
I thought it was all good. I didn't feel like it was much different from your normal writing style, if different at all. Just...less whump-ish. Haha! It was really sweet, but not too fluffy. *shrugs* I mean, if it was really choice a or choice b, it'd only be because it was part of a multi-chapter fic, and needing to move along. But, for this, it was fine.
53Jimmy CandlestickSo, for some reason, when this arrived in my inbox, I read that it had 18,000 words...so, I put it off. And then I looked at it again. It's all good. I was actually a little surprised how easily I was able to read it at this length. I'm not used to this big a word count in a one-shot. So, congratulations, you kept my attention. :)
I thought it was all good. I didn't feel like it was much different from your normal writing style, if different at all. Just...less whump-ish. Haha! It was really sweet, but not too fluffy. *shrugs* I mean, if it was really choice a or choice b, it'd only be because it was part of a multi-chapter fic, and needing to move along. But, for this, it was fine.
8/24/2010 c1 Caped Hero
Hey! I've reviewed your fic before under "Inkbug". But - it's SO GOOD to see you writing Thunderbirds fic again! I really enjoyed this piece, even if it was different from your usual writing. The conversation between Alan and Scott was perfect in the way everything just sort of lined up.
I really enjoyed this, it's just the kind of fic I need right before heading off to get some sleep. Wonderful job!
Hey! I've reviewed your fic before under "Inkbug". But - it's SO GOOD to see you writing Thunderbirds fic again! I really enjoyed this piece, even if it was different from your usual writing. The conversation between Alan and Scott was perfect in the way everything just sort of lined up.
I really enjoyed this, it's just the kind of fic I need right before heading off to get some sleep. Wonderful job!
8/23/2010 c1 14ayjaydee
Ohhhhh, I just love this story! Absolutely adorable are the first words that spring to mind. Very well done.
As for the way you wrote it, I find no fault other than it may have been just the tiniest bit over-discriptive where the hot chocolate was concerned. Other than that I think it was beautiful. :)
I adore Scott and Alan stories because of their unique relationship and this was perfect characterization. So thanks for that! (Especially the part at the end about the "missing" brownies, haha)
14ayjaydeeOhhhhh, I just love this story! Absolutely adorable are the first words that spring to mind. Very well done.
As for the way you wrote it, I find no fault other than it may have been just the tiniest bit over-discriptive where the hot chocolate was concerned. Other than that I think it was beautiful. :)
I adore Scott and Alan stories because of their unique relationship and this was perfect characterization. So thanks for that! (Especially the part at the end about the "missing" brownies, haha)
8/19/2010 c1 rose
I never have the occasion to make a review because I just discover your stories, but I just want to tell you how great they are. You are a incredible writer ! I love how you describe the characters, their emotions, their thoughts, everythings with such a depth.
What I prefer the most is all the love, hurt/comfort (love Alan whump lol), the family fluff especially the brotherly love or even jeff with the boys (... Anyway, I just hope that you will still spoil us with your fictions and keep doing this great job... Good luck with college !
(I dont know if it's very clear, sorry for my english, i'm french and to write english is not as easy as to understand... bisou)
I never have the occasion to make a review because I just discover your stories, but I just want to tell you how great they are. You are a incredible writer ! I love how you describe the characters, their emotions, their thoughts, everythings with such a depth.
What I prefer the most is all the love, hurt/comfort (love Alan whump lol), the family fluff especially the brotherly love or even jeff with the boys (... Anyway, I just hope that you will still spoil us with your fictions and keep doing this great job... Good luck with college !
(I dont know if it's very clear, sorry for my english, i'm french and to write english is not as easy as to understand... bisou)
8/19/2010 c1 21Cip
LOVED IT! (don't I always?)
The style was, admittedly, different, but I really enjoyed it. The amount of detail painted the picture perfectly - although there were cases when I wondered if there was a simpler way of putting what you'd said whilst still keeping the same meaning. Sorry!
I absolutely squeeed when he got the ring out - I think they could hear me all the way in Australia! You know, you should really write an original story and get it published. You have such a wonderful individual style and way of portraying what the characters are thinking, it would be a shame if you didn't make the most of such a wonderful gift :D
And a hug to Tin-tin in this story ^_^
Cip
xoxox
21CipLOVED IT! (don't I always?)
The style was, admittedly, different, but I really enjoyed it. The amount of detail painted the picture perfectly - although there were cases when I wondered if there was a simpler way of putting what you'd said whilst still keeping the same meaning. Sorry!
I absolutely squeeed when he got the ring out - I think they could hear me all the way in Australia! You know, you should really write an original story and get it published. You have such a wonderful individual style and way of portraying what the characters are thinking, it would be a shame if you didn't make the most of such a wonderful gift :D
And a hug to Tin-tin in this story ^_^
Cip
xoxox
8/19/2010 c1 4Once.A.Queen.Of.Narnia
I've always loved reading your stuff because you seem to connect with the Tracys and your own characters so well! I really feel like I'm standing there with them every time I read!
One suggestion: Can we maybe have a little more Gordon whump? He might be my fave but he needs some whump attention too! xD
4Once.A.Queen.Of.NarniaI've always loved reading your stuff because you seem to connect with the Tracys and your own characters so well! I really feel like I'm standing there with them every time I read!
One suggestion: Can we maybe have a little more Gordon whump? He might be my fave but he needs some whump attention too! xD