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12/18/2011 c7 12nightfuries
First off,love your profile picture :)

Interesting story. I'm excited to see where it goes. There's certainly a variety of tributes so far
7/4/2011 c7 4Twirlgirl821
That chapter was cute. With volunteering to help Nan because she looks like his sisters. Over all really good work.
2/25/2011 c5 Kaneki Haise
is it to late to submit a mentor? Name: Alexander Knight District 2 built like an ox. Shot blake hair. Striking Hazel eyes. The capital killed his family, for not bein a whore. He is one, but only to protect his lover, Tarah. He hates the capital.
10/18/2010 c6 14kristina.cullen
Does it mean village idiot?

Good job so far.

Keep writing :)
10/16/2010 c6 JunkyardGirl64
Ugh, I fail at reviewing. I was reading this & forgot to. Anyway, this chapter was better than the last. I can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the characters!
10/16/2010 c6 Midori-chan902
I can't believe I forgot to review! I'm really liking the tributes in this one! Hope you update soon~
10/15/2010 c6 21The Lady Cloudy
Hey it's Cloudy!

Just reviewing to say that chapter was awesome and I really like Cassie Darkblade she seems pretty cool and like a normal Career. I'm not a huge fan of kind and caring Careers, there trained killers for gods sake! Srry bout ranting :)

-Cloudy
10/13/2010 c6 3Aurora-Royale
I think it's sad Kramer doesn't know any of his siblings... But I'm glad he volunteered for Dylan, otherwise Cassie would have some problems... Oh well! Great chapter, update soon!
10/13/2010 c6 4Twirlgirl821
Wow, you wrote Cassie wonderfully. It was really good. Thank god that the other kid volunteered :) keep up the good work.
10/9/2010 c4 16Asellia Skyrunner
Update ASAP plz!
9/15/2010 c5 3Aurora-Royale
Yay! Yay! Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter! When you listed the final tributes, I think you used mine for District 3 so I can't wait for that chapter .

Update soon!
9/15/2010 c5 5Turq8
Is it French? I know amour is love or something like that.

I thought it was really good, but some of the PoV switching was kind of confusing. Maybe try it all in one PoV, then go to the other's view of the reapings? Or do the reapings separately, then the good byes? Of course, these are just suggestions, it's your story, and you are the writer!
9/15/2010 c5 16Asellia Skyrunner
I don't like Tran. At all. :P But I do kinda like Day. ;) Haha. If mine don't win, I kinda want her to. :) Update ASAP but no preassure b/c I get the whole 'i've-got-a-million-things-to-do-and-not-enough-time-to-do-them' thing, what w/ high school and all. :) Just update when you can please. :)
9/14/2010 c5 JunkyardGirl64
It's JunkyardGird24 here, just posted with another account because I just can't remember my password. Anywho, I'm loving what you did with the characters in D1, hope you'll do the same when I see Cerise. Happy Hunger Games~!
9/14/2010 c5 Midori-chan902
Great chapter! I really like these two for some reason, especially Tran, since he loves the games. AND Amour-propre means something like pride or self esteem, right?
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