
4/4/2016 c1 TheCrimsonScar
Awesome, really deep. Don't listen to haters.
Haters gotta hate.
Potatoes gotta Potate.
Awesome, really deep. Don't listen to haters.
Haters gotta hate.
Potatoes gotta Potate.
8/24/2010 c1
23Hououza
Beautifully done.
I like the contrast between the general view of Sunako and Kyohei's more personal one. Its the difference between the people who view her from afar and the one who got past the wall she surrounds herself with to look at the person beneath.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza

Beautifully done.
I like the contrast between the general view of Sunako and Kyohei's more personal one. Its the difference between the people who view her from afar and the one who got past the wall she surrounds herself with to look at the person beneath.
Good luck & best wishes,
Hououza
8/23/2010 c1
3kurui
Hi! This is beautifully written, I love Kyouhei's point of view on Sunako. Good job :)

Hi! This is beautifully written, I love Kyouhei's point of view on Sunako. Good job :)
8/19/2010 c1
1anitsirhc
lovely, i loved it! ^_^ hope you will make a story with more chapters in it because i think you can create beautiful chapters or story. =) it is such a waste if you do not share your beautiful ideas. =( hope you will consider my suggestion! ^_^ keep up the great work, good luck to your future stories and hope to see you around! =)

lovely, i loved it! ^_^ hope you will make a story with more chapters in it because i think you can create beautiful chapters or story. =) it is such a waste if you do not share your beautiful ideas. =( hope you will consider my suggestion! ^_^ keep up the great work, good luck to your future stories and hope to see you around! =)
8/16/2010 c1
12ShreddingRibbons
absolutely lovely. i was so pleased at how cliche-free this was, and how true.

absolutely lovely. i was so pleased at how cliche-free this was, and how true.