for The Nights of Las Noches9/8/2010 c5 nypsy
the writing, the imagery is really beautiful. the descriptions of longing and especially ulqui's thoughts really rope in the reader-felt like a vouyer (sp?), if it was a real person, that is. There's a few typo's towards middle/end but otherwise, perfect. & steamy kiss! can't wait till next update.
the writing, the imagery is really beautiful. the descriptions of longing and especially ulqui's thoughts really rope in the reader-felt like a vouyer (sp?), if it was a real person, that is. There's a few typo's towards middle/end but otherwise, perfect. & steamy kiss! can't wait till next update.
9/8/2010 c5 Onlynameleft
Wow. Sooooo intense. Just like Ulquiorra.
I like how you laid this chapter out. In summary...
Orihime: I want to comfort you.
Ulquiorra: Actions speak louder than words.
Orihime: Wha-!
*Ulquiorra pounces on her*
Ulquiorra: MINE.
LOL. The beast has his prey cornered. Shall he lay claim or is Aizen waiting for Ulquiorra to return to the meeting after 'just checking up on the guest'. I hope these two don't get caught... Or at least I hope Ulquiorra remembered to lock his woman's door.
Will they get away with their intimacy? *fidgets* I MUST know.
In other, calmer words: Enjoyed this chapter and look foreward to see what the beast in Ulquiorra does next! :D
Wow. Sooooo intense. Just like Ulquiorra.
I like how you laid this chapter out. In summary...
Orihime: I want to comfort you.
Ulquiorra: Actions speak louder than words.
Orihime: Wha-!
*Ulquiorra pounces on her*
Ulquiorra: MINE.
LOL. The beast has his prey cornered. Shall he lay claim or is Aizen waiting for Ulquiorra to return to the meeting after 'just checking up on the guest'. I hope these two don't get caught... Or at least I hope Ulquiorra remembered to lock his woman's door.
Will they get away with their intimacy? *fidgets* I MUST know.
In other, calmer words: Enjoyed this chapter and look foreward to see what the beast in Ulquiorra does next! :D
9/7/2010 c5 
54JC-zala
The lust becomes love. Strong attractions and cravings were fulfilled. Ulquiorra could not longer hold back the temptation. And Orihime had realized how he means to him.
Great chapter once again!
54JC-zalaThe lust becomes love. Strong attractions and cravings were fulfilled. Ulquiorra could not longer hold back the temptation. And Orihime had realized how he means to him.
Great chapter once again!
9/7/2010 c5 1xtomoex
This chapter was so enchanting..The words you use to describe the interactions between Ulquiorra and Orihime are compelling and vivid..I absolutely love the way you portray Ulquiorra's internal thoughts and conflicts..The one word musings that run through his mind are perfect..I also thought Orihime's comparison of Ichigo to the sun and Ulquiorra to the moon was beautifully done..It shows in a poetic way Orihime's feelings for Ichigo are fading and her love for Ulquiorra is surfacing and becoming stronger..I was elated that this chapter contained moments of affection between the two of them..As I've said before I really enjoy good Ulquihime fluff and you write it particularly well..I hope there is more to come..You have also managed to keep everyone in character while changing small details here and there so that the relationship between Orihime and Ulquiorra does not seem forced or overly unrealistic..I'm anxious to read what happens in the next chapter..I know you will continue to do an amazing job..Please update as soon as you can..I can hardley wait!
1xtomoexThis chapter was so enchanting..The words you use to describe the interactions between Ulquiorra and Orihime are compelling and vivid..I absolutely love the way you portray Ulquiorra's internal thoughts and conflicts..The one word musings that run through his mind are perfect..I also thought Orihime's comparison of Ichigo to the sun and Ulquiorra to the moon was beautifully done..It shows in a poetic way Orihime's feelings for Ichigo are fading and her love for Ulquiorra is surfacing and becoming stronger..I was elated that this chapter contained moments of affection between the two of them..As I've said before I really enjoy good Ulquihime fluff and you write it particularly well..I hope there is more to come..You have also managed to keep everyone in character while changing small details here and there so that the relationship between Orihime and Ulquiorra does not seem forced or overly unrealistic..I'm anxious to read what happens in the next chapter..I know you will continue to do an amazing job..Please update as soon as you can..I can hardley wait!
9/7/2010 c5 17randomfan17
Awww, that was sweet. Though chocking out the person you love is wrong ;p I don't have to wonder what they do next do I.
17randomfan17Awww, that was sweet. Though chocking out the person you love is wrong ;p I don't have to wonder what they do next do I.
8/29/2010 c4 randomfan17
ooohhh, i wonder what's going to happen? lol, he probably took it as an invitation. can't wait for the next one.
ooohhh, i wonder what's going to happen? lol, he probably took it as an invitation. can't wait for the next one.
8/29/2010 c3 randomfan17
See this is perfect for them, though i admit i like a slightly obssessive Ulquiorra a lot.
See this is perfect for them, though i admit i like a slightly obssessive Ulquiorra a lot.
8/29/2010 c1 randomfan17
I hated when he died, it was just so horrible to me(even though i knew he was a bad guy i didn't mind him killing ichigo). I think they would have made a perfect couple. Now onto the next part so i see where this is going.
I hated when he died, it was just so horrible to me(even though i knew he was a bad guy i didn't mind him killing ichigo). I think they would have made a perfect couple. Now onto the next part so i see where this is going.
8/27/2010 c1 26rubyxblade
Ok, usually I wait until after I've finished reading to leave a review, and I will probably leave another, but this poem was really nice. It made me all teary.
26rubyxbladeOk, usually I wait until after I've finished reading to leave a review, and I will probably leave another, but this poem was really nice. It made me all teary.