for The Nights of Las Noches8/27/2010 c4 Onlynameleft
JUST KISS HER ALREADY!
Hee! Sorry, had to say it.
ARGH! CLIFFHANGERS! NOOOOOOO! *echoes*
Ack! Please update soon! I'm dying here!
JUST KISS HER ALREADY!
Hee! Sorry, had to say it.
ARGH! CLIFFHANGERS! NOOOOOOO! *echoes*
Ack! Please update soon! I'm dying here!
8/27/2010 c4 
54JC-zala
Lustful yearnings that will soon develop into the feeling called love. Ulquiorra's thoughts were written well once more. I find it so hot and luscious for Ulquiorra to yearn for her warmth and touch. It was another thrilling chapter.
54JC-zalaLustful yearnings that will soon develop into the feeling called love. Ulquiorra's thoughts were written well once more. I find it so hot and luscious for Ulquiorra to yearn for her warmth and touch. It was another thrilling chapter.
8/27/2010 c4 1xtomoex
Beautifully written..I love the insight you give into Ulquiorra's mind..I can't wait for the next chapter..I hope Orihime reciprocates Ulquiorra's feelings..I always enjoy the fics that allow the two of them to triumph over adversity..I know..I'm a sucker for fluff..I've really enjoyed reading this fic so far...you are truley doing a wonderful job..I'm anxiously awaiting the update!
1xtomoexBeautifully written..I love the insight you give into Ulquiorra's mind..I can't wait for the next chapter..I hope Orihime reciprocates Ulquiorra's feelings..I always enjoy the fics that allow the two of them to triumph over adversity..I know..I'm a sucker for fluff..I've really enjoyed reading this fic so far...you are truley doing a wonderful job..I'm anxiously awaiting the update!
8/23/2010 c3 54JC-zala
Ulquiorra's lust for her grows at every scent, every touch, and every time he gazes his eyes upon her. The beauty that captivated him, the one who fascinated him... As new feelings rise from the depths of his heart, he dwells upon the confusion in his mind.
Crying, feeling, pouring out emotions-things that make us Human, Orihime has the right idea on that. Though she displays tears, she is strong at heart. She's not weak, as Ulquiorra have thought, but she's merely fragile in his hands.
I've enjoyed reading this chapter. It set off a sweet interest in me as a reader. I am truly looking forward to the next one. You've captured his character, though some parts were off, but it was good nevertheless. The lust growing inside him really makes it more interesting.
May I recommend my story to you for reading and reviewing as well? I'd like to hear your opinion as well since you're a good writer. My first UlquiHime fic is entitled "Love in the Mask".
54JC-zalaUlquiorra's lust for her grows at every scent, every touch, and every time he gazes his eyes upon her. The beauty that captivated him, the one who fascinated him... As new feelings rise from the depths of his heart, he dwells upon the confusion in his mind.
Crying, feeling, pouring out emotions-things that make us Human, Orihime has the right idea on that. Though she displays tears, she is strong at heart. She's not weak, as Ulquiorra have thought, but she's merely fragile in his hands.
I've enjoyed reading this chapter. It set off a sweet interest in me as a reader. I am truly looking forward to the next one. You've captured his character, though some parts were off, but it was good nevertheless. The lust growing inside him really makes it more interesting.
May I recommend my story to you for reading and reviewing as well? I'd like to hear your opinion as well since you're a good writer. My first UlquiHime fic is entitled "Love in the Mask".
8/21/2010 c3 5Panther X
Oh my goodness, you've done it again! :D
There are a couple places where the grammar and punctuation could be edited to make the narrative flow better (if you would like, I could go through the doc thoroughly and find them for you).
I must say that I LOVE the one-word thought things throughout the story. They feel very Ulquiorra-y and really make the mood of the piece!
Keep up the great work! :)
5Panther XOh my goodness, you've done it again! :D
There are a couple places where the grammar and punctuation could be edited to make the narrative flow better (if you would like, I could go through the doc thoroughly and find them for you).
I must say that I LOVE the one-word thought things throughout the story. They feel very Ulquiorra-y and really make the mood of the piece!
Keep up the great work! :)
8/21/2010 c3 Onlynameleft
Ah. THis has to be one of the most beautifully written Ulquihime fics I've seen.
I love how you presented both character POVs especially for giving a clear distinction between the man and a woman's thinking. A man's need for flesh. A woman's need for bonding.
I was especially appreciative how you described the Ulqiorra's carnal desires as "the beast." Heh. Any lady with a boyfriend should show this chapter to him and ask him "Is this what your mind goes through every time we snuggle? Fess up!"
Again. This was a wonderfully written chapter. Thank you for sharing it.
Ah. THis has to be one of the most beautifully written Ulquihime fics I've seen.
I love how you presented both character POVs especially for giving a clear distinction between the man and a woman's thinking. A man's need for flesh. A woman's need for bonding.
I was especially appreciative how you described the Ulqiorra's carnal desires as "the beast." Heh. Any lady with a boyfriend should show this chapter to him and ask him "Is this what your mind goes through every time we snuggle? Fess up!"
Again. This was a wonderfully written chapter. Thank you for sharing it.
8/20/2010 c1 Panther X
I'm just this close to tears! This is beautifully written. There are a few places where punctuation could be used to make the writing voice flow better, but otherwise it's great!
I'm just this close to tears! This is beautifully written. There are a few places where punctuation could be used to make the writing voice flow better, but otherwise it's great!
8/17/2010 c2 nypsy
really like ulqui's introspection here. can't fight chemistry I suppose. Look forward to next chap.
really like ulqui's introspection here. can't fight chemistry I suppose. Look forward to next chap.