2/7/2017 c4 Guest
Does Orihime help him? If you can't tell UlquiHime is one of my favorites.
Does Orihime help him? If you can't tell UlquiHime is one of my favorites.
10/9/2016 c10 Guest
Thanks!
Thanks!
3/17/2016 c9 4drmona lord
it's a shame you no longer feel interest toward bleach because I was really getting interested in this fic not many authors write this kida fic and don't turn it into a mushy romance.
I find when I am loosing interest in a fic or a series that taking a break from it for a bit than re watching it from the very beginning can reignite my love for it also reading other authors works sometimes helps as it is always nice to have a fresh perspective.
it's a shame you no longer feel interest toward bleach because I was really getting interested in this fic not many authors write this kida fic and don't turn it into a mushy romance.
I find when I am loosing interest in a fic or a series that taking a break from it for a bit than re watching it from the very beginning can reignite my love for it also reading other authors works sometimes helps as it is always nice to have a fresh perspective.
8/17/2013 c1 Guest
I must say, I really liked the arrancar-purified-to-shinigami part. It adds a nice twist to the story. I thought this was just gonna be one of those typical shinigami academy fics, but you surprised me. Pleasantly, mind you.
P.S. not to be cocky or anything but, categorizing yaoi with crap will offend numerous people. Even though it doesn't work with your story and they might agree that it doesn't, stating yaoi is related to crap would limit the number of people who'll read this. I wouldn't have read this if I wasn't reading just the first parts of the summary.. When I finally spotted your full summary, I had half a mind to stop reading. Just to help you in the summary field.
I must say, I really liked the arrancar-purified-to-shinigami part. It adds a nice twist to the story. I thought this was just gonna be one of those typical shinigami academy fics, but you surprised me. Pleasantly, mind you.
P.S. not to be cocky or anything but, categorizing yaoi with crap will offend numerous people. Even though it doesn't work with your story and they might agree that it doesn't, stating yaoi is related to crap would limit the number of people who'll read this. I wouldn't have read this if I wasn't reading just the first parts of the summary.. When I finally spotted your full summary, I had half a mind to stop reading. Just to help you in the summary field.
2/15/2012 c10 Jason
So far an excellent series, I hope you continue when you have time. I've enjoyed your work, and find that it is very well done, not too focused on Ichigo but I like that you chose to develop the ex-hallows. Anyways good job so far and I hope you continue.
So far an excellent series, I hope you continue when you have time. I've enjoyed your work, and find that it is very well done, not too focused on Ichigo but I like that you chose to develop the ex-hallows. Anyways good job so far and I hope you continue.
9/1/2011 c2 3Jigokuchou-chan
Your idea for the story is really good, but it all seems kinda rushed... You should slow down a little, and add more details...
Also:
1. They probably wouldn't learn Hado #31 first... They'd probably learn Hado #1: Sho...
2. Academy students have to take 6 years of classes, not 1...
Your idea for the story is really good, but it all seems kinda rushed... You should slow down a little, and add more details...
Also:
1. They probably wouldn't learn Hado #31 first... They'd probably learn Hado #1: Sho...
2. Academy students have to take 6 years of classes, not 1...
8/29/2011 c9 MugetsuIchigo
hmm...i don't remember reading this fic but i did since i reviewed before,i forgot what happened...
hmm...i don't remember reading this fic but i did since i reviewed before,i forgot what happened...
2/28/2011 c9 Hotaru Vie Jaegerjaquez
really love this story... I'm fan of Grimmjow and Ulquiorra...
anyway, please update soon...
really love this story... I'm fan of Grimmjow and Ulquiorra...
anyway, please update soon...
12/21/2010 c9 3shorty35565
Poor Ulqui, Orihime has such odd tastes in food.
haha u don't own bleach of the moon LOL
Hmmm, it's looking like Orihime is liking Ulquiorra!
Poor Ulqui, Orihime has such odd tastes in food.
haha u don't own bleach of the moon LOL
Hmmm, it's looking like Orihime is liking Ulquiorra!
12/5/2010 c8 NightTrain
I don't mean to flame or anything but slight mistake. "Pantera" is spanish for panther. The name of an arrancarrs' zanpaktou is in spanish. Since Grimmjow is now a shinigami his zanpaktous' name would have to be in japanese, just like all shinigami
I don't mean to flame or anything but slight mistake. "Pantera" is spanish for panther. The name of an arrancarrs' zanpaktou is in spanish. Since Grimmjow is now a shinigami his zanpaktous' name would have to be in japanese, just like all shinigami
11/3/2010 c4 shorty35565
I liked the parts where they were talkin to their z spirits. tht was well written.
I liked the parts where they were talkin to their z spirits. tht was well written.