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8/30/2011 c1 57The Mad Hatter Effect
I came to review some of your own writing, to see if you knew what you were talking about and honestly all I see is the tell and not the show.

There really is not any description to help the reader en-visualize what exactly is going on. While you may think the lack of adjectives is better it does not help the reader see what you, the writer, is seeing as you had written it.

In fact your writing balances dangerously near Beige Prose.

Honestly after reading your lack of detailed writing I have come to believe that you are only attempting to shove your style of writing down my throat.
7/13/2011 c2 13xxWARxx
These are extremely well-written and adorable and I LOVE it! Can't wait for the next one! :D

~SoulLove
7/2/2011 c2 8Semjaza
Aw, this is great. I love this exploration of their friendship. :D
7/2/2011 c1 Semjaza
I really liked this! The character interaction was great, and Dante was hilarious. :D
2/18/2011 c2 58TenchiSaWaDa
Not bad. Continue forth.
8/26/2010 c2 11callrnequeen
I like this, it's pretty damn cute...and sweet... Update soon!
8/18/2010 c2 7Shadow-of-a-Wolf
romance ah done so well. keep up the good work
8/16/2010 c2 12Ladyintime
I love your story(s)! Keep 'em comin!

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