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for Forbidden to cry

8/16/2010 c1 59F91
Well I thought you developed Auris and Hayate's relationship rather well, though I still don't think Hayate would act that mean towards Auris. Anyways, pretty interesting and quite unfortunate. Just be careful with your OC there. Some Mary Sue flags popping up.

This fic should totally be rated M, btw.

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