7/22/2012 c1 3she.dreams.in.colour
The way you made this chapter unfold is quite compelling, even though I had my reservations when I first read the HP Buffy tag. :) I'm not sure what to hope for given the date in the publish tag, but I do think that you are a competent writer and I would love to read more of your works. I know you from your review for my story, so something for the TVD section, hopefully? :)
The way you made this chapter unfold is quite compelling, even though I had my reservations when I first read the HP Buffy tag. :) I'm not sure what to hope for given the date in the publish tag, but I do think that you are a competent writer and I would love to read more of your works. I know you from your review for my story, so something for the TVD section, hopefully? :)
2/19/2011 c1 18DemonKittyAngel
Ok, I haven't started reading so I'll finish reviewing after that but tell your friend she did an amazing job on that vid. It was very enjoyable. Although; is kendra going to be a main character or is she just representing someone else? Just wondering but I'm sure the story will answer. ^^
I get why they don't show up again and love you! This story is well paced, well done tension, and I think you captured how it would feel in that situation although I didn't really feel sucked into it. Ya'kno', like the emotion stayed on the page. I like how you wrote Harmony and Cordy; it's totally nailed.
...and crap you have me talking in 90's slang. '-_- May I now assume that Kendra is the current slayer and you reversed the order? And will the Malfoys come up next chappy? *puppy dog eyes*
If the story continues to be this great I might just put it on my faves. ^^ (I do not do this lightly)
Ok, I haven't started reading so I'll finish reviewing after that but tell your friend she did an amazing job on that vid. It was very enjoyable. Although; is kendra going to be a main character or is she just representing someone else? Just wondering but I'm sure the story will answer. ^^
I get why they don't show up again and love you! This story is well paced, well done tension, and I think you captured how it would feel in that situation although I didn't really feel sucked into it. Ya'kno', like the emotion stayed on the page. I like how you wrote Harmony and Cordy; it's totally nailed.
...and crap you have me talking in 90's slang. '-_- May I now assume that Kendra is the current slayer and you reversed the order? And will the Malfoys come up next chappy? *puppy dog eyes*
If the story continues to be this great I might just put it on my faves. ^^ (I do not do this lightly)