for One With Magic8/18/2010 c4 BioHazard82
Great story so far. Please do not make this a slash story! I want to keep reading but if it goes that route I will have to stop. Please update soon, and often!
Great story so far. Please do not make this a slash story! I want to keep reading but if it goes that route I will have to stop. Please update soon, and often!
8/17/2010 c4 
1D.R. Sviridovich
Wow, this is some sort of crack story that actually makes sense... You've got good grammar and spelling which is something you don't really see on this site all that much. Can't wait for the next update. Later!
1D.R. SviridovichWow, this is some sort of crack story that actually makes sense... You've got good grammar and spelling which is something you don't really see on this site all that much. Can't wait for the next update. Later!
8/17/2010 c1 sanyal
this is good ! read all four chapters at a go and i cant wait for more.
quiet an original take as well.
keep it up. and thanks for posting.
this is good ! read all four chapters at a go and i cant wait for more.
quiet an original take as well.
keep it up. and thanks for posting.
8/17/2010 c4 3x-EliteAssassin-x
I love the idea of delinquent Harry, and I'm really looking forward to where you will take this story!
3x-EliteAssassin-xI love the idea of delinquent Harry, and I'm really looking forward to where you will take this story!
8/17/2010 c4 Guest
This story makes no sense. Maybe in your seriously disturbed phantasy they throw 9 years olds in such environments but not in england.
This story makes no sense. Maybe in your seriously disturbed phantasy they throw 9 years olds in such environments but not in england.