
2/12/2011 c11 RingTheBella
oh man, you made me push Bella off a bridge! I'm a bit of a b*tch aren't I? ;)
Bree's not even trying to hide it anymore and Renee is a b*tch too.
Nice end to the chapter.
oh man, you made me push Bella off a bridge! I'm a bit of a b*tch aren't I? ;)
Bree's not even trying to hide it anymore and Renee is a b*tch too.
Nice end to the chapter.
2/6/2011 c10 RingTheBella2
(oops, that last comment about the title of the story was suposed to be a review on the previous chapter.)
When I first read the story summary, I assumed the "family tragedy" would happen in chapter 2 or 3 and it's now way past that and no tragedy yet. You're killing me with anticipation! I hope Bree gets her sh*t together fairly soon. She seemed like a cool kid before.
(oops, that last comment about the title of the story was suposed to be a review on the previous chapter.)
When I first read the story summary, I assumed the "family tragedy" would happen in chapter 2 or 3 and it's now way past that and no tragedy yet. You're killing me with anticipation! I hope Bree gets her sh*t together fairly soon. She seemed like a cool kid before.
2/6/2011 c10 RingTheBella
How did you come up with the title for this story? I'm not making a connection between it and anything from the story.
How did you come up with the title for this story? I'm not making a connection between it and anything from the story.
2/6/2011 c8 RingTheBella
In answer to your question, I like the longer chapters myself. The dinner between Charlie/Edward was sure unexpected. Nice touch.
I was surprised that Bella never asked the question "why are you telling me the truth NOW?" Her reaction was understandable considering what she's been through. But it still made me sad.
In answer to your question, I like the longer chapters myself. The dinner between Charlie/Edward was sure unexpected. Nice touch.
I was surprised that Bella never asked the question "why are you telling me the truth NOW?" Her reaction was understandable considering what she's been through. But it still made me sad.
2/5/2011 c7 RingTheBella
Bella/Quil sex. Wow. didn't see that coming. I was so bummed when it looked like they were going to fall in love but then BAM, he's a jerk for not telling her until AFTER they had sex a bunch of times. and then she spends quality time with "Anthony". Wow. the surprises just kept coming this chapter.
Bella/Quil sex. Wow. didn't see that coming. I was so bummed when it looked like they were going to fall in love but then BAM, he's a jerk for not telling her until AFTER they had sex a bunch of times. and then she spends quality time with "Anthony". Wow. the surprises just kept coming this chapter.
2/5/2011 c5 RingTheBella
my Dad died from causes related to smoking all his life, so I *really* hate that Bella smokes. If I offer you a virtual foot rub, will you make her quit? ;)
I don't read too many stories that don't have Bella as an only child, or if she does have a half-sister, she's a bitch. It's nice to see Bella as a big sister to someone who's nice.
my Dad died from causes related to smoking all his life, so I *really* hate that Bella smokes. If I offer you a virtual foot rub, will you make her quit? ;)
I don't read too many stories that don't have Bella as an only child, or if she does have a half-sister, she's a bitch. It's nice to see Bella as a big sister to someone who's nice.
1/5/2011 c9
3October25
Silly Edward tricks are for kids, because I think that could work but if it doesn't I apologize.Thanks for updating it was a good chapter. I hope they work it out. Empire Records is with Liv Tyler and Reese Witherspoon right?

Silly Edward tricks are for kids, because I think that could work but if it doesn't I apologize.Thanks for updating it was a good chapter. I hope they work it out. Empire Records is with Liv Tyler and Reese Witherspoon right?
11/26/2010 c6 marlena516
I don't recall if I mentioned in my beta notes that I'm Marlena516 on here too...but just in case of any confusion, it's me. :)
Anyways, I'm caught up on the entire story now, and I'm really enjoying it! Great job!
I don't recall if I mentioned in my beta notes that I'm Marlena516 on here too...but just in case of any confusion, it's me. :)
Anyways, I'm caught up on the entire story now, and I'm really enjoying it! Great job!
11/21/2010 c5 HeathersTwilight
Wasn't expecting that lol. I could care less what people do (as long as it is overage and there is consent). Phil cheated and I can't imagine why Renee would want to stay with him. Please tell me that you aren't going to have Edward be a cross dresser!
Wasn't expecting that lol. I could care less what people do (as long as it is overage and there is consent). Phil cheated and I can't imagine why Renee would want to stay with him. Please tell me that you aren't going to have Edward be a cross dresser!
11/10/2010 c4
8Sabi'sSookie
Are we FINALLY going to find out the deal with Bella and Phil and whatever happened? I'm DYING to know! And salons are the best place to get shit out! I swear, they're like a bar minus the drunken ramblings!
Naked Jasper was great! I'm still giggling from that little encounter! I was glad to be right with guessing Jasper. Well, I guessed it was either him or Edward, but details schmetails...
Anywho, can't wait for more!

Are we FINALLY going to find out the deal with Bella and Phil and whatever happened? I'm DYING to know! And salons are the best place to get shit out! I swear, they're like a bar minus the drunken ramblings!
Naked Jasper was great! I'm still giggling from that little encounter! I was glad to be right with guessing Jasper. Well, I guessed it was either him or Edward, but details schmetails...
Anywho, can't wait for more!
11/2/2010 c3 Sabi'sSookie
Hmmm... someone lurking in the apartment you say? Is it Edward time? Or maybe Jasper paying a visit? Either would work for me ;)
Can't wait to see where you take this!
Hmmm... someone lurking in the apartment you say? Is it Edward time? Or maybe Jasper paying a visit? Either would work for me ;)
Can't wait to see where you take this!