for Soul Fliers8/15/2011 c14 M
that was adorable! amazing job!
that was adorable! amazing job!
7/8/2011 c14 Cyd the Squid
This was really great and creative! An interesting way to weave the characters into an entirely new story. Can't wait to read more of your work.
This was really great and creative! An interesting way to weave the characters into an entirely new story. Can't wait to read more of your work.
7/2/2011 c1 sogian
wow! This is diferrent... I'd loved if they fell in love imediatelly but I can't wait to read the rest... What did Alice see? And did Bella felt something for Edward or was it only that he was a vampire? What did he said in the begging that she may leave him or die? Don't let her die... Why can't he change her?
wow! This is diferrent... I'd loved if they fell in love imediatelly but I can't wait to read the rest... What did Alice see? And did Bella felt something for Edward or was it only that he was a vampire? What did he said in the begging that she may leave him or die? Don't let her die... Why can't he change her?
4/26/2011 c14 
2TwilightMelodic
omg i loved it
soo dramactic
i think i found the perfect sound to match the song edward came up with for bella
Emile Pandolfi somewwhere in time piano solo please watch on youtube
2TwilightMelodicomg i loved it
soo dramactic
i think i found the perfect sound to match the song edward came up with for bella
Emile Pandolfi somewwhere in time piano solo please watch on youtube
3/11/2011 c14 RosesFromDrew
I loved this story and it was really interesting to read about the Soul Fliers - it's very impressive that you made up such a...realistic (I don't think that's the best word to use, but I can't think of a word to describe what I'm trying to say - I hope you get it) species. :)
I loved this story and it was really interesting to read about the Soul Fliers - it's very impressive that you made up such a...realistic (I don't think that's the best word to use, but I can't think of a word to describe what I'm trying to say - I hope you get it) species. :)
3/2/2011 c14 3MelkiSihou
I liked it! It was a great and original story! Great job of it. So sad to see it go though.
3MelkiSihouI liked it! It was a great and original story! Great job of it. So sad to see it go though.
2/26/2011 c14 Pianogirl05
I'm glad Jacob didn't take on a major role. I really don't like it when he is allowed to pine after Bella. I enjoyed the ending with them finally getting their date. Another great story you have written. Thanks for sharing with us
I'm glad Jacob didn't take on a major role. I really don't like it when he is allowed to pine after Bella. I enjoyed the ending with them finally getting their date. Another great story you have written. Thanks for sharing with us
2/26/2011 c6 Pianogirl05
Love how you chose to have Bella express her feelings for Edward. Awesome job!
Love how you chose to have Bella express her feelings for Edward. Awesome job!
2/26/2011 c1 Pianogirl05
I love stories in Edward's POV. I'm sure I will enjoy this story. I loved reading "Tier in Geist".
I love stories in Edward's POV. I'm sure I will enjoy this story. I loved reading "Tier in Geist".
2/26/2011 c14 HopePotterMasen
Great chapter
Wonderful story, I really enjoyed reading it.
So thank you for writing it. :)
Great chapter
Wonderful story, I really enjoyed reading it.
So thank you for writing it. :)
2/25/2011 c14 2Fibonnaci Magic
Great work! Please keep it up because it's got potential and I surgess you make a sequel.
2Fibonnaci MagicGreat work! Please keep it up because it's got potential and I surgess you make a sequel.