2/24/2011 c14 2VP4444
hey that was a good way to end the story. im glad that you had fun writing this story because i had fun reading it. well good bye for now and bye!

2/24/2011 c14 UnseenAngel22
Bravo! Bravo! that was an incredible story. very nicely written. 5 stars. 3

2/23/2011 c13 unregisteredloser
Simply Aaaaaamazing! Love the whole story! Can't wait for the epilouge, and it is very well written.

2/22/2011 c13 6Lionnara
that was amazing i see its soon is over(story)

love it..

keep going..

2/22/2011 c12 9Modern Audrey
I'm a little confused. Why would Bella remark about not bringing an untrained fighter into battle? Why would the wolves be considered more well trained or experienced? Last time I checked, they were a bunch of teenagers who randomly assumed the ability to transform into wolves less than a year ago. Apart from brute strength, it would be lambs to the slaughter. Whereas the Cullens range from just below a century to three centuries old. Wouldn't it be more logical to assume they've been in a fight or two more than the wolf pack?

It's a little distracting, and as it effects the way we are supposed to view Bella's actions in so many prior chapters I feel like the huge gap in logic really takes away from the story so far.

2/22/2011 c13 5vivx-chan
loved this chapter! (Don't know what else to say XD)

2/21/2011 c11 HopePotterMasen
*fantastic* :)