for The Witch Trials9/4/2010 c1 
14zynaofthenight
Love it. Absolutely love it. :D
I'm split. For one, I'm curious about what Virginia would do. But then, this is perfect as an one-shot.
Whatever you do, just know that I love this story :D
I'll put this on alert, just in case.
14zynaofthenightLove it. Absolutely love it. :D
I'm split. For one, I'm curious about what Virginia would do. But then, this is perfect as an one-shot.
Whatever you do, just know that I love this story :D
I'll put this on alert, just in case.
9/4/2010 c1 10The Midnight Doe
I read this awhile ago, favorited it, and decided to review it now. :)
I like this idea, it's really original. I liked Catherine and Thomas a lot. Oh, and I like little Virginia(:
The only thing is that Hecate was a maiden goddess. So, she really wouldn't have any children. But, I like this story still.
Oh, and your grammar was really good. I don't think I saw any noticeable mistakes, so good job(:
Great story, you're a really good writer(:
~Doe
10The Midnight DoeI read this awhile ago, favorited it, and decided to review it now. :)
I like this idea, it's really original. I liked Catherine and Thomas a lot. Oh, and I like little Virginia(:
The only thing is that Hecate was a maiden goddess. So, she really wouldn't have any children. But, I like this story still.
Oh, and your grammar was really good. I don't think I saw any noticeable mistakes, so good job(:
Great story, you're a really good writer(:
~Doe
8/28/2010 c1 shorty
tell us her story now or you cannot have some of my desert tonight!
tell us her story now or you cannot have some of my desert tonight!
8/20/2010 c1 2CherryCottonCandyCherry
Wow! This story almost made me cry. I had tears in my eyes. This is amazing! I absoluely love it! You could write more. I don't know. I mean it's fine the wway it is, but you could add more if you wanted.
2CherryCottonCandyCherryWow! This story almost made me cry. I had tears in my eyes. This is amazing! I absoluely love it! You could write more. I don't know. I mean it's fine the wway it is, but you could add more if you wanted.
8/20/2010 c1 4Annabella Prinx
YES! keep on writing, it is a wonderful story and Virginia's life sounds pretty interesting! I love fiction!
Love ya,
Annabella
4Annabella PrinxYES! keep on writing, it is a wonderful story and Virginia's life sounds pretty interesting! I love fiction!
Love ya,
Annabella
8/20/2010 c1 Katzey
This is really sad but you did a wonderful job
This is really sad but you did a wonderful job
8/20/2010 c1 1Zoe Nightshade
Love the idea of a demigod in the Salem witch trials, but you need way, way more description. It's basically, as is:
Dialogue.
Short line.
Dialogue.
Short line.
I would put in more emotion, not just description of emotion as well.
1Zoe NightshadeLove the idea of a demigod in the Salem witch trials, but you need way, way more description. It's basically, as is:
Dialogue.
Short line.
Dialogue.
Short line.
I would put in more emotion, not just description of emotion as well.
8/20/2010 c1 apocalyptic lullabies
Actually, only twenty people died. 19 were hung, 1 person was crushed (Giles Corey), and 1 dog was beheaded.
Those who confessed of witchcraft weren't killed though, the were exorcised. Those who did not confess were put to death.
Virginia Dare wasn't born during the Salem Witch Trials.
Oh, and they actually took place in a town called Salem Village.
All the corrections beside, it was really good, please continue it.
- Amariah, wishful adopter of Schrodinger's cat
Actually, only twenty people died. 19 were hung, 1 person was crushed (Giles Corey), and 1 dog was beheaded.
Those who confessed of witchcraft weren't killed though, the were exorcised. Those who did not confess were put to death.
Virginia Dare wasn't born during the Salem Witch Trials.
Oh, and they actually took place in a town called Salem Village.
All the corrections beside, it was really good, please continue it.
- Amariah, wishful adopter of Schrodinger's cat
8/20/2010 c1 8Golden Raindrops
This was great. You took a historical event and incorporated Greek mythology into it very well. You have talent as a writer.
8Golden RaindropsThis was great. You took a historical event and incorporated Greek mythology into it very well. You have talent as a writer.
8/20/2010 c1 JessMusicNote
Ohh! Continue please! Great story! I aboustly loved it. You ought to keep going, Virginia should have her parents powers as well, since her parents are half mortal half god, means she would be a demi-god too.
No mistake's that I could see, amazing story.
~Sololight
Ohh! Continue please! Great story! I aboustly loved it. You ought to keep going, Virginia should have her parents powers as well, since her parents are half mortal half god, means she would be a demi-god too.
No mistake's that I could see, amazing story.
~Sololight
8/19/2010 c1 1SonOfHestia-11
This is such a sad story but it is also good in a way I don't know about telling you to continue the story but I think that it would make a great story by just the well you wrote this bit of the story. I also loved the bit were you made Catherine the daughter of Hecate made a great twist in the story, but if you wish to continue the story then go right ahead. Good luck with the story and may you never have writers block
1SonOfHestia-11This is such a sad story but it is also good in a way I don't know about telling you to continue the story but I think that it would make a great story by just the well you wrote this bit of the story. I also loved the bit were you made Catherine the daughter of Hecate made a great twist in the story, but if you wish to continue the story then go right ahead. Good luck with the story and may you never have writers block