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2/28/2015 c1 hitomi65
Nice story
7/24/2012 c1 5cool-girl027
i'm really curious about how this story will go...sasuke or should i say sasmi doesn't really hate her brother...why?...i really want to know how this story progresses...pls update soon... thanks
7/5/2012 c1 1reconwithme
oh...god ...it's so...AWESOME When are you going to write more please write another chapter, as you can see, its summer vaca here in california and i have absolutely nothing to do but to think of more chapter to write, me being a sucky author, needs to read more and take notes :D
6/27/2012 c1 Mokutonton
A Fem!fic? Oh, I love you for doing this. It's a wonderful concept that you've created.

I'll be looking forward to this!
12/18/2011 c7 TheDrawer
update soon please :)

i love the story.
11/4/2011 c7 EmbersoftheNightChild
nice job :) this story is pretty interesting
8/23/2011 c7 4The Detective Prince
Time for my promised review. :) I don't review enough. Forgive me if it's a little...poor.

So. I liked this new take on the canon. I'm not usually into FemSasuke (Or genderchanging at all) but this one had my interest from the start.

Writing in first person can be difficult I know but you seem to be managing it well. :)

Also I've not noticed many grammar mistakes which is great.

The fact you're getting so many reviews is testimony that this story's great. :) I get about 4 reviews a chapter so 11 is mind-blowing.

Keep it up. And my question I'm dying to as? When's the next chapter? XD
7/1/2011 c7 1Still Not Dead Yet
Interesting how they can`t see the whole fight.

"And you and your village hasn't staged a coup d├ętat because?.." Never would I come to know the pure irony from my own suggestion until much later in my life. XD lol!

Awkward silence is awkward.

Say where do you get your opening quotes from?

I look forward to your next update!
6/28/2011 c7 Sukee93
Ah, it's great if you change some things of the canon, and yeah, it will be interesting! :) Cant' wait for more ^^
6/28/2011 c1 Guest
I cant stand people like you. SASUKE UCHIHA IS MALE. NARUTO UZUMAKI IS MALE. BOYS. MEN. WHATEVER. THEY HAVE A PENIS.

There is no Sasuki. There is only Sasuke and Naruto. And if SASUKE is in love with Naruto then its yaoi. Wanna know why? Because they are both boys. BOYS!

I have nothing against heterosexual fanfictions, but STOP changing genders. If you want Sasuke or Naruto to be in love with a girl make it an OC or another female from the show.

And dont even complain about this in your next chapter. Because this is my opinion and we are ALL intitled to our opinions. That is what the review box is for. And if you delete this review you are just proving to me that you are immature and can't handle what other people have to say about your story. Dont get me wrong you have skill but I'm sick of gender bender stories like this. Because lets be honest, this Sasuki character is NOT Sasuke. It is an OC in reality. And I'm just helping you face it.
6/28/2011 c7 21Dick Rash
Well, maybe because this story is getting a badassery award.
6/22/2011 c6 Dick Rash
Good, good; characterization is awesome, thoughts spot on, and 'trauma' epic.
6/18/2011 c1 abc
charter: A Naruto x Sasuke library featuring Seme!Naruto and Uke!Sasuke.

...which means NO female Sasuke in this community
6/17/2011 c6 Sukee93
Great, can't wait for more :)
6/17/2011 c1 RonaldWeasleyTheHero
wow dude i mean girl! first chapter was amazing to read,i am totally hooked, im gonna read chapter 2 and review. THIS IS THE SHET!
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