for Leaving10/17/2010 c1 Starzinmieyez
You should continue this as a full length story. It would be interesting :)
You should continue this as a full length story. It would be interesting :)
9/1/2010 c1 Starzinmieyez
Hey! This was great as a one-shot and all, but you could continue it! Y'know, make it into a proper story! Either way, great job! XD
Hey! This was great as a one-shot and all, but you could continue it! Y'know, make it into a proper story! Either way, great job! XD
8/26/2010 c1 Randomer of the UK
I love this story, I hope there is to be more one day :)
I love this story, I hope there is to be more one day :)
8/22/2010 c1 Sandan1992
I've been thinking about this idea a lot since I reviewed, and I have to say that I am envious that I didn't think of it first! There are so many different ways to take this idea and I hope you take full advantage of the opportunity at hand! Good luck again, I'm sure that you'll do great with this.
-Ben
I've been thinking about this idea a lot since I reviewed, and I have to say that I am envious that I didn't think of it first! There are so many different ways to take this idea and I hope you take full advantage of the opportunity at hand! Good luck again, I'm sure that you'll do great with this.
-Ben
8/22/2010 c1 
8Sandan1992
*deep whistle* Wow, much harsher than most post-TLK2 fics. Very well written and full of well instituted problems. Since it doesn't say 'complete' I'm assuming that there WILL be more, and I'm hoping that it won't all be sad like this, though if that's the way it goes then so be it.
-Ben
8Sandan1992*deep whistle* Wow, much harsher than most post-TLK2 fics. Very well written and full of well instituted problems. Since it doesn't say 'complete' I'm assuming that there WILL be more, and I'm hoping that it won't all be sad like this, though if that's the way it goes then so be it.
-Ben
8/22/2010 c1 theshrimp23
this is so good CONTINUE
this is so good CONTINUE