for That Girl's A Trick8/15/2014 c2 Toonhead
When can u write the 3rd chapter these are really good
When can u write the 3rd chapter these are really good
5/17/2014 c2 Guest
absolutely amazing, obviously try to put twists and drama in, but overall get your butt up and keep doing what you're doing
absolutely amazing, obviously try to put twists and drama in, but overall get your butt up and keep doing what you're doing
9/20/2010 c2 akjdhfiusf
this is really good:) i cant wait for the next chapter so please update it soon!:D
this is really good:) i cant wait for the next chapter so please update it soon!:D
9/11/2010 c2 
9I'llbeyourhero
I love this so far :) you need to update it soon because see now you've got me hanging on waiting for the next chapter lol. They are so cute :) and I absolutely love Alex 3
9I'llbeyourheroI love this so far :) you need to update it soon because see now you've got me hanging on waiting for the next chapter lol. They are so cute :) and I absolutely love Alex 3
8/30/2010 c2 18Tomatoes
this is amusing. I love how you talk about Alex's car. And Mitchie's sneakers are hot. A (unasked for I know) advice i can give you is that try to prolong Alex's feelings a little bit. There's no need to rush and it's only been a day. Other than that you have me on my knees. Update~
18Tomatoesthis is amusing. I love how you talk about Alex's car. And Mitchie's sneakers are hot. A (unasked for I know) advice i can give you is that try to prolong Alex's feelings a little bit. There's no need to rush and it's only been a day. Other than that you have me on my knees. Update~
8/30/2010 c2 TwilightBizarre
I think I'm in love with this story! And Mitchie is sooo cute, the way she wants to hang out with Alex, but she'd let her go with those idiots that call themselves cool people. And I like that Alex sees trough all that fake stuff. I wanna see how will it work out between them . Update soon :)
I think I'm in love with this story! And Mitchie is sooo cute, the way she wants to hang out with Alex, but she'd let her go with those idiots that call themselves cool people. And I like that Alex sees trough all that fake stuff. I wanna see how will it work out between them . Update soon :)
8/30/2010 c2 1tatimac
alex rocks!
she's beeing so nice with mitchie
i loved waht she said to miley, that was so nice
i felt so bad for mitchie, she doesn't deserve that
she's really nice, she can't stop smiling around alex
looks like she's falling in love with alex too! \o/
1tatimacalex rocks!
she's beeing so nice with mitchie
i loved waht she said to miley, that was so nice
i felt so bad for mitchie, she doesn't deserve that
she's really nice, she can't stop smiling around alex
looks like she's falling in love with alex too! \o/
8/30/2010 c1 3everythingurnot
i like this story .. n i have a question why does everybody hate Mitchie?
3everythingurnoti like this story .. n i have a question why does everybody hate Mitchie?
8/28/2010 c1 7ennessjai
You totally need to continue. I think this will be awesome. & awesome car btw. ;]]
7ennessjaiYou totally need to continue. I think this will be awesome. & awesome car btw. ;]]
8/26/2010 c1 8Ms. H. Scarlet
I think this story deserves a review solely because you used the word "contingency". You should definitely continue writing it - the beginning has a lot of promise.
8Ms. H. ScarletI think this story deserves a review solely because you used the word "contingency". You should definitely continue writing it - the beginning has a lot of promise.
8/23/2010 c1 tttaylor09
very promising start. i love the this providence reference :)
its also very nicely written, hope you decide to keep it going.
very promising start. i love the this providence reference :)
its also very nicely written, hope you decide to keep it going.