
7/2/2012 c18
3Snowflake1515
really good story so far i really enjoy it i hope that you keep up the good work :) please post a new chapter soon! :)

really good story so far i really enjoy it i hope that you keep up the good work :) please post a new chapter soon! :)
7/28/2011 c18 WOLFGAL-JasperSaysRelax
aww, so glaad Brokkiee's bacck! bless embry's little heart:D3
so what's gonna happen with evie? Is she gonna wake up? Is she gonna die? Please tell me she's not gonna die- owh i dont want her to die! I'm kinda hyper- I had lots of fruit pastelles3
i lovee embrry! way way mucch! lovee it3
aww, so glaad Brokkiee's bacck! bless embry's little heart:D3
so what's gonna happen with evie? Is she gonna wake up? Is she gonna die? Please tell me she's not gonna die- owh i dont want her to die! I'm kinda hyper- I had lots of fruit pastelles3
i lovee embrry! way way mucch! lovee it3
7/27/2011 c18
2CentrumPermanebit
I loved this chapter! It was so good. :P I loved the last line the most, though. XD I forgot, why does she hate her Mom so much? :o Is it because she lied to her about her Dad? Or something else?
Please update soon. (:

I loved this chapter! It was so good. :P I loved the last line the most, though. XD I forgot, why does she hate her Mom so much? :o Is it because she lied to her about her Dad? Or something else?
Please update soon. (:
3/14/2011 c17 mrs.sethclearwater
Noooooooooo ! U can't stop ther ! U evil person ! Hehe jk but tht is da worst place to stop ! Uplaod more for da sake of my sanity ! * no I'm not gonna go all pshycho* lol
Noooooooooo ! U can't stop ther ! U evil person ! Hehe jk but tht is da worst place to stop ! Uplaod more for da sake of my sanity ! * no I'm not gonna go all pshycho* lol
3/13/2011 c17
2CentrumPermanebit
OMG! That was insanely amazing! You've gotta update soon! Pretty please? With cherries on top? Like, who doesn't love cherries? Sooo, you gotta update cause I'm offering cherries! :P I need to know what happens neeeext! PLEEEASE update soon! :)

OMG! That was insanely amazing! You've gotta update soon! Pretty please? With cherries on top? Like, who doesn't love cherries? Sooo, you gotta update cause I'm offering cherries! :P I need to know what happens neeeext! PLEEEASE update soon! :)
3/12/2011 c17
1lani'sworld
loved it (L)
i'd like to what embry is feeling in that moment!
take care,xx

loved it (L)
i'd like to what embry is feeling in that moment!
take care,xx
2/27/2011 c16 bee
Oh my gosh! Next chapter asap PLEASE!
Oh my gosh! Next chapter asap PLEASE!
2/27/2011 c16
6Munchkin Jeeves
Your story is amazing. I love Brooklyn's character. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Your story is amazing. I love Brooklyn's character. Can't wait for the next chapter :)