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10/19/2016 c1 Julia
Breath-taking beautiful :)
5/19/2012 c1 PanonLove
That was lovely :)
10/27/2011 c1 14Alia Rubrik
Naw, Bree, this fic is as beautiful as you are... Which is absolutely gorgeous! I love you XD

-Your (partially) insane friend who started a revolution with the Ancient History seating :D xoxox
3/22/2011 c1 12Bringg Mee Flowerss
you write freeverse so beautiful! amazing job, and you picked a great story to work off of too, I loopoove the name ariadne.

anywhooo, fantastic piece :)
11/1/2010 c1 nNOPE NO PE NOE P EPN OPE
Oh wow, Bree! This was absolutely beautiful (:

I love freeverses, and this one was amazing.

You are honestly one of my favorite writers on fanfiction :D

(And Teddy/Lily is love 33)
10/31/2010 c1 1MeLovesDracoGinny
This was fantastic.

It was so emotional and it was just... I can't even find WORDS to say how good it was.

Basically, I loved it. It was so good I want more.

It was beautiful.
10/20/2010 c1 6in sync
This just might be one of my favorite TeddyLily stories I've read. And I've read a lot of them.

There are so many beautiful metaphors and comparison's in this, but I have to agree with Ellie when she says that the AriadneTheseus was her favorite- it was mine to.
9/7/2010 c1 44with the monsters
So, Bree, I love you forever for this. So few people can do freeverse, and here you've just /nailed/ it. And it's TeddyLily! It couldn't possibly be a better birthday present :D

Your writing was beautiful and poetic and fabulous, and I cannot even begin to tell you how compelling your metaphors are. Seriously, they're just incandescent and I loved every one of them. I think the Ariadne/Theseus one was my favourite, though. But only by the /tiniest/ amount!

Thank you sosososososo much for this, you're the best!
8/28/2010 c1 bleggh
Aw, this was too cute and adorable for my eyes to read, I smiled and had a feeling of wanting to cry while reading this, not sure why, but I did :) you are just amazing at writing. I hope you do know that.
8/26/2010 c1 44a walk on the w i l d side
That is so sweet. I really love it. It's beautiful, it really is.

Thankyou for that,

CKC
8/25/2010 c1 63opaque-girl
This was amazing =D Definietly the best free verse I have ever read =D Its so amazing, so beautiful and the comparisons are so lovely.. Just perfect for their relationship.. their happily ever after =D

This line is definietly my favorite:

This time, she gives you her hand

&& it's greater than a piece of string

Amazing work and Thanks a lot for sharing it =D
8/24/2010 c1 lonely hands
This is just gorgeous! I love it so much :))

'And you're not planning

to return to reality

e v e r • a g a i n'

That was just my all time favourite part and 'tis the perfect ending!
8/24/2010 c1 LikeAVision
Wooooo!Is it a coincidence that I was listening to Your Body Is A Wonderland right now?Wow!I seriously loved it,you know.It fit so well with the song,I don't know why.I liked that there was no sense of sadness in this fic,nor that sense of responsibility and angst...it was just...free,and happy.I'm going to read it again now.:)
8/24/2010 c1 56wishingonlightning
Aww this is very cute! I love all of the different references in this, it worked really well. I loved the lines:

And you're not planning

to return to reality

e v e r • a g a i n

Really great job!
8/23/2010 c1 dex lucas
Wow, this is amazing freeverse, great job with this!

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