for Emmett's Pasta4/29/2011 c1 Joseph
Some minor grammar errors but but good story you should re-write it! :)
Some minor grammar errors but but good story you should re-write it! :)
2/10/2011 c1 
3a novelist
I liked it :) Well done.
I like Emmett's character. He's funny, especially in this story.
3a novelistI liked it :) Well done.
I like Emmett's character. He's funny, especially in this story.
9/2/2010 c1 Sam
Poor Emmet!
Poor Emmet!
8/24/2010 c1 Crimsonella
I found this really cute and funny, a little bit short but still a really good o/s ! :)
I found this really cute and funny, a little bit short but still a really good o/s ! :)
8/24/2010 c1 RJRRAA
Loved it, poor Emmett.
Loved it, poor Emmett.