for Naruto: The Shinobi Exorcist12/21/2022 c2 
22Yami Luna Kitsune
when are you going to add more chapters to this story?
it's been over a decade
22Yami Luna Kitsunewhen are you going to add more chapters to this story?
it's been over a decade
3/2/2013 c2 Serinity Dawn
And here I was hoping that someone was going to continue an awesome story! I am very very sad. I was so looking forward to seeing Cross and Naruto butt heads as well as Allen and Naru team up on Kanda. LOL. I hope that you can contine this story eventially.
And here I was hoping that someone was going to continue an awesome story! I am very very sad. I was so looking forward to seeing Cross and Naruto butt heads as well as Allen and Naru team up on Kanda. LOL. I hope that you can contine this story eventially.
11/24/2010 c2 0Deleted-Profile0
really nice. hope you update soon. i'm really starting to like this one.
really nice. hope you update soon. i'm really starting to like this one.
11/11/2010 c2 howlingwindofthestorm
its good, your writing is consistent and it makes sense and paints a good picture. but i have to ask, why gundam armor? my suggestion is that maybe the innocence be his kyuubi form or something. sorry, thats just my opinion you don't have to use it, but i would be happier if you did.
its good, your writing is consistent and it makes sense and paints a good picture. but i have to ask, why gundam armor? my suggestion is that maybe the innocence be his kyuubi form or something. sorry, thats just my opinion you don't have to use it, but i would be happier if you did.
11/9/2010 c1 Ultimate-Zelda-fan
I'm not saying you have to do the upgrade immediately. Most likely around the Japan/Noah's Arc arc. I mean, his abilities would have to upgrade at some point since he will eventually reach his limit and have to come up with some way to surpass it. Unless you're thinking of making his critical syncronization Shining Gundam's Super Mode.
I'm not saying you have to do the upgrade immediately. Most likely around the Japan/Noah's Arc arc. I mean, his abilities would have to upgrade at some point since he will eventually reach his limit and have to come up with some way to surpass it. Unless you're thinking of making his critical syncronization Shining Gundam's Super Mode.
11/9/2010 c2 Ultimate-Zelda-fan
Something tells me that at some point in the story Naruto's Innocence is going to evolve to be more like Burning Gundam, am I right?
Something tells me that at some point in the story Naruto's Innocence is going to evolve to be more like Burning Gundam, am I right?
9/20/2010 c2 invisible-gurl
lol this actually might work... like seriously XD anyways what happened to sasuke then? did he end up having to go back to konoha or did kabuto take him?... and how the hell does Cross of all people know about shinobi? great job so far, it's a little short but that's ok =) plz update soon ^^
lol this actually might work... like seriously XD anyways what happened to sasuke then? did he end up having to go back to konoha or did kabuto take him?... and how the hell does Cross of all people know about shinobi? great job so far, it's a little short but that's ok =) plz update soon ^^