for The dark Saviour1/25/2020 c3 Indigo
Could you at the very least correct Vpldemort's name? It has only one r in it...
Could you at the very least correct Vpldemort's name? It has only one r in it...
3/21/2014 c5 Sam68
The ending was a little too quick, like how he suddenly decided to live with Snape, but otherwise, this story was BOSS!
The ending was a little too quick, like how he suddenly decided to live with Snape, but otherwise, this story was BOSS!
2/5/2014 c5 Play-doh Akumu
It seems like you stumbled onto a great plot, but failed to execute it well. Planting an idea in Harry Potter's mind, like "magic is a weapon," is difficult when he already views magic as a good thing. Changing his mind would need a high climax. Tons of conflict, angst, drama, etc.
It could have been great, but instead it flopped. In this story, Harry had literally 2 dreams before he started attacking the Dursleys. Voldemort, a master manipulator, was felled in one conversation.
The climax, which should have been a tidal wave, became a puddle. Really pathetic attempt at this plot.
It seems like you stumbled onto a great plot, but failed to execute it well. Planting an idea in Harry Potter's mind, like "magic is a weapon," is difficult when he already views magic as a good thing. Changing his mind would need a high climax. Tons of conflict, angst, drama, etc.
It could have been great, but instead it flopped. In this story, Harry had literally 2 dreams before he started attacking the Dursleys. Voldemort, a master manipulator, was felled in one conversation.
The climax, which should have been a tidal wave, became a puddle. Really pathetic attempt at this plot.
8/21/2013 c5 
25Miriam1
That was an interesting place to leave this, but it is oddly satisfying.
Nicely done.
Sincerely,
Miriam
25Miriam1That was an interesting place to leave this, but it is oddly satisfying.
Nicely done.
Sincerely,
Miriam
8/21/2013 c3 Miriam1
It's rather frightening, but as you've written this, Voldemort may indeed win this one.
While that won't be good for the Wizarding World, I'm not overly fussed if he did. I would be sad for Harry, I would completely understand his reasoning.
Lupin saw what Sirius saw: they left Harry with ridiculously meager provisions, and rather than listening to Sirius, who wants to take Harry away from the abuse and the neglect, Lupin is more than willing to leave Harry there because "he needed the protection of the wards around the house."
But those wards never protected Harry from anything that took place IN the house.
I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this.
Sincerely,
Miriam
It's rather frightening, but as you've written this, Voldemort may indeed win this one.
While that won't be good for the Wizarding World, I'm not overly fussed if he did. I would be sad for Harry, I would completely understand his reasoning.
Lupin saw what Sirius saw: they left Harry with ridiculously meager provisions, and rather than listening to Sirius, who wants to take Harry away from the abuse and the neglect, Lupin is more than willing to leave Harry there because "he needed the protection of the wards around the house."
But those wards never protected Harry from anything that took place IN the house.
I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this.
Sincerely,
Miriam
8/21/2013 c2 Miriam1
This has gotten very interesting very quickly.
Hmm... I remember reading in the "Philosopher's Stone" that Aunt Petunia was afraid to leave Harry alone, unattended because she was afraid he might blow up the house. And look - he's done just that!
Harry has a lot of reasons to be angry, and even more reasons to exact revenge. I hope he doesn't turn completely evil, although a little darkness is rather understandable.
I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Sincerely,
Miriam
This has gotten very interesting very quickly.
Hmm... I remember reading in the "Philosopher's Stone" that Aunt Petunia was afraid to leave Harry alone, unattended because she was afraid he might blow up the house. And look - he's done just that!
Harry has a lot of reasons to be angry, and even more reasons to exact revenge. I hope he doesn't turn completely evil, although a little darkness is rather understandable.
I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Sincerely,
Miriam
3/24/2013 c5 19Resident Evil Lionhart
It would have been interesting if Severus defected to Voldemort with Harry and they could have made Dumbledore pay for letting Harry get hurt so long. Especially as I can't see Harry letting Voldemort control him even if he had killed the Dursleys.
19Resident Evil LionhartIt would have been interesting if Severus defected to Voldemort with Harry and they could have made Dumbledore pay for letting Harry get hurt so long. Especially as I can't see Harry letting Voldemort control him even if he had killed the Dursleys.
2/12/2013 c5 helga1967
The human being is linked with one another as I love Snape Harry intervened to do something that would have great consequence and in turn his life is saved by Harry.
The human being is linked with one another as I love Snape Harry intervened to do something that would have great consequence and in turn his life is saved by Harry.
2/11/2013 c5 Guest
I love the line in the previous chapter, because of what his family has done to him, Harry Potter has turned evil. Well, it is more he was shown how to turn evil. A good little story.
I love the line in the previous chapter, because of what his family has done to him, Harry Potter has turned evil. Well, it is more he was shown how to turn evil. A good little story.
2/7/2013 c5 54TayaCJ
I really like the ideas in this story, although I feel that they could be expanded on a bit as it seems a little rushed. Overall however, I really like this story :)
54TayaCJI really like the ideas in this story, although I feel that they could be expanded on a bit as it seems a little rushed. Overall however, I really like this story :)
2/7/2013 c5 Guest
Fitting chapter name, everything that was good about this story ended with this chapter.
Fitting chapter name, everything that was good about this story ended with this chapter.