for The Start of Beauty9/24/2010 c5 
385Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!
Now...this was A-D-O-Rable!
^O^ at Haruka. She's got it bad! X3
And *O* at the ShizNao part. It was just adorable! I really liked Shizuru's thought of joining Nao. *O*
Nice work! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
385Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!
Now...this was A-D-O-Rable!
^O^ at Haruka. She's got it bad! X3
And *O* at the ShizNao part. It was just adorable! I really liked Shizuru's thought of joining Nao. *O*
Nice work! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
8/28/2010 c4 5Indiobotod
haruka is so cute here! And I love the friendship between the two naughtiest Himes in this fic. I won't forget what I've read in the 2d chapter of this story, particularly of Shizuru's initial interest with Natsuki by claiming to marry her when they grow up. 'Hope to read some exhilarating and fun interaction between them in the succeeding chapters. Thanks for the fast update
5Indiobotodharuka is so cute here! And I love the friendship between the two naughtiest Himes in this fic. I won't forget what I've read in the 2d chapter of this story, particularly of Shizuru's initial interest with Natsuki by claiming to marry her when they grow up. 'Hope to read some exhilarating and fun interaction between them in the succeeding chapters. Thanks for the fast update
8/28/2010 c4 385Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!
Now, this was interesting, and pretty darn cute. LOL
*O* at Haruka. She's SO C-U-TE! X3
And ^O^ at ShizNao. I certainly approve. :D
Nice work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
385Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!
Now, this was interesting, and pretty darn cute. LOL
*O* at Haruka. She's SO C-U-TE! X3
And ^O^ at ShizNao. I certainly approve. :D
Nice work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
8/26/2010 c3 Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
Now...
LOL
LMAO
ROFL
This was just priceless.
Nao makin' Shizuru blush? *O*
And :DD at Jealous as Hell!Haruka. :DD THAT'S full of WIN, right there.
Now, know that I only want NON-ShizNat pairing. I'm happy with Shizuru and Natsuki NOT hookin' up. Keep that in mind, marine.
Nice work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Well, well, soldier...
Now...
LOL
LMAO
ROFL
This was just priceless.
Nao makin' Shizuru blush? *O*
And :DD at Jealous as Hell!Haruka. :DD THAT'S full of WIN, right there.
Now, know that I only want NON-ShizNat pairing. I'm happy with Shizuru and Natsuki NOT hookin' up. Keep that in mind, marine.
Nice work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
8/26/2010 c3 ShadowCub
Four year olds at the mall where are their parents?
Oh hell no Shizuru and Natsuki.
Push the two annoying ones together Nao and Haruka.
Surprised that Nao isn't in detention or prison whichever
one holds her the longest.
Four year olds at the mall where are their parents?
Oh hell no Shizuru and Natsuki.
Push the two annoying ones together Nao and Haruka.
Surprised that Nao isn't in detention or prison whichever
one holds her the longest.
8/26/2010 c3 5Indiobotod
lol. Shizuru and Naob are terrible brats! their naughtiness is cute! 'can't wait for them to turn 9 or older!
5Indiobotodlol. Shizuru and Naob are terrible brats! their naughtiness is cute! 'can't wait for them to turn 9 or older!
8/25/2010 c1 1kikyo4ever
LOL
Good gracious, Shizuru will grow up to be a very dangerous temptress. She's only 4 yrs old and she was already looking up girls skirts...LOL dangerous indeed!
Ah, I like the dad..he seems like a wonderful guy, so care free about his daugther.
Who would be Shizzuru's partner? Well, we will have to leave that to Shizuru's judgement right...she got good eyes, so hopefully she would settle with a particular emerald eyes beauty.
1kikyo4everLOL
Good gracious, Shizuru will grow up to be a very dangerous temptress. She's only 4 yrs old and she was already looking up girls skirts...LOL dangerous indeed!
Ah, I like the dad..he seems like a wonderful guy, so care free about his daugther.
Who would be Shizzuru's partner? Well, we will have to leave that to Shizuru's judgement right...she got good eyes, so hopefully she would settle with a particular emerald eyes beauty.
8/25/2010 c2 4DannyDeeDanny
Mm. I like this story...but uhhh...four is a bit young for such streaming self awareness...
Should have made them six or so...
Either way, I like shiznat...
but Shizuru/Nao friendship would be awesome..maybe make a fallout because both like Natsuki...
Just an idea.
4DannyDeeDannyMm. I like this story...but uhhh...four is a bit young for such streaming self awareness...
Should have made them six or so...
Either way, I like shiznat...
but Shizuru/Nao friendship would be awesome..maybe make a fallout because both like Natsuki...
Just an idea.
8/25/2010 c2 385Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
*O*
This was A-D-O-Rable!
And Dyslexic!Haruka right off the bat! LOL That was great! :D
And...:O What's this? ShizNao? Oooooooooh! :DDDDDD Nice!
Now, I wanna see a competition for Shizuru's heart! Nao VS Haruka! Pretty please? ^O^
Oh! And remember!
NO SHIZNAT!
Mission start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
385Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
*O*
This was A-D-O-Rable!
And Dyslexic!Haruka right off the bat! LOL That was great! :D
And...:O What's this? ShizNao? Oooooooooh! :DDDDDD Nice!
Now, I wanna see a competition for Shizuru's heart! Nao VS Haruka! Pretty please? ^O^
Oh! And remember!
NO SHIZNAT!
Mission start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
8/25/2010 c2 62Twisted Eternal Wolvetta
Omg. Shizuru was that untame during her younger years? Lol, well it shouldn't be so surprising really, since this is Shizuru we're talking about! I think a mixture of ShizNatsu and NatNao would go well for this actually, especially with the summary for the next chapter, it brings flavour to the story! Shizuru needs a few problems going over the place! All in all I don’t mind who Shizuru goes with.
I do like NaoMai though, eh; a fan of too many pairings I suppose, but anyhow; this is definitely a story I'm going to keep an eye on, it’s cute and not to mention... err... cute.
We’ll have to wait until next update it seems!
PS - I love Shizuru's Dad, he's amazing lol.
62Twisted Eternal WolvettaOmg. Shizuru was that untame during her younger years? Lol, well it shouldn't be so surprising really, since this is Shizuru we're talking about! I think a mixture of ShizNatsu and NatNao would go well for this actually, especially with the summary for the next chapter, it brings flavour to the story! Shizuru needs a few problems going over the place! All in all I don’t mind who Shizuru goes with.
I do like NaoMai though, eh; a fan of too many pairings I suppose, but anyhow; this is definitely a story I'm going to keep an eye on, it’s cute and not to mention... err... cute.
We’ll have to wait until next update it seems!
PS - I love Shizuru's Dad, he's amazing lol.
8/25/2010 c2 ShadowCub
I'd like to see more of chibi lecherous Shizuru
and her proud pop!
Maybe a flshback to her first adventure?
I'd like to see more of chibi lecherous Shizuru
and her proud pop!
Maybe a flshback to her first adventure?
8/25/2010 c1 5Indiobotod
a perverted chibi Shizuru is so cute. lol. I am a ShizNat shipper so I have my vote for Natsuki as her leading lady here.
5Indiobotoda perverted chibi Shizuru is so cute. lol. I am a ShizNat shipper so I have my vote for Natsuki as her leading lady here.
8/24/2010 c1 timesnewamerican
Cute story. It's interesting to see Shizuru as lecherous even when she's still in her "innocent" ages.
Just one request: Shiznat FTW. They just seem really cute together. It would be interesting to see them meet at the pool. Nice work. ^^
Cute story. It's interesting to see Shizuru as lecherous even when she's still in her "innocent" ages.
Just one request: Shiznat FTW. They just seem really cute together. It would be interesting to see them meet at the pool. Nice work. ^^
8/24/2010 c1 385Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
HOO-RRAH! 1º review EVAR, btches!
And, being the 1º EVAR reader to review, I shall ask for this simple request to be granted: NO SHIZNAT!
Hook Shizuru up with ANYBODY you want EXCEPT for Natsuki! =A=
Now, with THAT outta the way...
LOL
LMAO
ROFL
Chibi-Shizuru is A-D-O-Rable! *O*
Total ROFLOL at Iiko's "looking up skirts and dresses" comment. ROFLOL
So, if I had to choose...I'd say...Haruka! :DDD HaruZuke FTFW!
So, if ya respond to this review with a "No ShizNat" comment, I'll definitely be hooked.
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
385Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
HOO-RRAH! 1º review EVAR, btches!
And, being the 1º EVAR reader to review, I shall ask for this simple request to be granted: NO SHIZNAT!
Hook Shizuru up with ANYBODY you want EXCEPT for Natsuki! =A=
Now, with THAT outta the way...
LOL
LMAO
ROFL
Chibi-Shizuru is A-D-O-Rable! *O*
Total ROFLOL at Iiko's "looking up skirts and dresses" comment. ROFLOL
So, if I had to choose...I'd say...Haruka! :DDD HaruZuke FTFW!
So, if ya respond to this review with a "No ShizNat" comment, I'll definitely be hooked.
Semper-Fi! Carry on!