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6/20/2017 c14 grandmachix
Edward in the other car. Oh, my!
Judy
6/20/2017 c12 grandmachix
I thought they were going to 'do it' before he left. I'm glad they didn't. In 2 years A lot can change. Especially when they are so young.
Judy
6/19/2017 c8 grandmachix
It's getting closer to the real deal. I hope he's not setting her up to drop her afterwards.
Judy
6/19/2017 c4 grandmachix
Edward is a bit of a prick, isn't he. Jacob seems to accept being a friend.
Judy
6/19/2017 c1 grandmachix
So glad you didn't pull this when you published. It's the only way for me to read it. Thank you.
Judy
6/18/2017 c31 16Oh Carol
omg I randomly thought about Starry Eyed earlier today, and how much I loves it. this is awsome!
6/16/2017 c20 Old Soul in Wonderland
God! Every chapter I read I get more confused and frustrated by Edward.
He says such few words and the words that he says are such a riddle that I have no idea how Bella deciphers/ understands anything he says.
Like when he says "I didn't appreciate what I had until I didn't have it". Does that mean that he didn't care for Bella or like her when they had their thing the first time around? Did he just think of her as a warm body?
And if he cared about her so much, how could he so callously stop talking to her?
I don't understand Edward at all and it's so frustrating.
Like I don't think that Edward understands, of really cares, about how he made Bella feel during their first relationship and time apart. Like when the girl that you were "dating" for months actually has to ask:
"Did you really like me? When we were together? Or was it more when you left?"
Like clearly there is a problem. And all he can say is that she "didn't seem to care" abouand the lack of labels. Like I'm sorry, but he knew that she liked him and he just kind of jerked her around. And I don't get how, even know, he doesn't understand how cold his actions were. Like would he want someone doing that to his sister?
He seriously makes me so frustrated lol.
This is truly an amazing story and I can't stop reading!
I can't wait for more! :)
6/16/2017 c19 Old Soul in Wonderland
I seriously love this story so much. It's beautiful and sweet and so amazing.
It's definitely how I wished my high school days went boy wise!
I do have to say though, I am kind of disappointed with Edward. Because he always seems to be jerking Bella around and he never seems to be straight with her. The first time around, he was so crappy to her and it all just felt like Bella was going to get her heart broken into a million pieces. Then he does the biggest dick move ever and just completely stop talking to her. Then he comes back as flirts and makes moves on her, knowing she has a boyfriend, and all the while letting Bella think that he's hooking up with all these girls. The games he plays and the fact that he's never straight with her drives me absolutely insane. It honestly feels like any second he's going to decide that Bella is too much work or she's not putting out fast enough and he's just going to up and leave. And it's always sort of felt like that in their relationship, but especially now.
I really wish that Bella made him work for it more. I don't know how she got over it all so easily. The fact that he would never define their relationship the first time around, making it seem like they were nothing more than physical, even though Bella made it very obvious that she had intense feelings for him. And then the fact that he stops talking to her and then comes back and messes with her feelings?
Yeah...
Not a huge fan of Edwards right now. I definitely think he has a lot of explaining and making up to do!
Also, I think it was extremely unfair for his parents to send him away. I don't really know how he got over that and was able to have some form of relationship with them. I would be angry and resent the hell out of my parents for just giving up so easily and sending me away.
Overall, I think this is an amazing story and I look forward to reading more! :)
6/14/2017 c31 Guest
YAY!
6/15/2017 c31 Pughtwins
; )
6/15/2017 c31 NY13
Hey Rochelle - you forgot a song rec for this info chapter...good luck in all you do.
6/15/2017 c31 nzjojo
Yay! I can't wait. Congratulations Rochelle :)
6/14/2017 c31 ElleOnEarth
You go, Ro! Soon you'll be on all the 'Best Sellers' lists...and we'll be writing fanfiction based on your former fanfiction. Ah, the circle of life. So...cover reveal?
6/14/2017 c9 1EdwardsFirstKiss
I so remember thinking everyone was watching when in fact they could have cared less. Lol

Everything seemed so clandestine...
6/14/2017 c31 3AbruptlyChagrined
Congratulations!
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