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1/12/2016 c6 1OcSickGirl
This chapter reminded me of something my dad told my mom when they found out I had a boyfriend...
Everyone needs to get caught with their pants down.
Except MY dad wasn't a cop. LOL
1/12/2016 c5 OcSickGirl
Shenanigans. I really like that Jake isn't getting all weird on her. That he is just her friend. There are not too many fics like that. Usually he's jealous or he hates Edward for some reason. I love that they are friends in this one.
1/12/2016 c4 OcSickGirl
I'm loving your song lists for every chapter. It's taking me baaaaaack! lol

And Edward's reaction is sooooo typical boy. And I was totally the same as Bella. :D
1/12/2016 c3 OcSickGirl
Mine was in the back of our school's forum during rehearsals for the school play. He had...strong lips. lol
1/12/2016 c1 OcSickGirl
I think summer is the best time to fall in love, and Are You In, is the song it happened to me with. God, I love Incubus.

Love the start to this one too!
12/31/2015 c30 3Idk68923
I should have gone too bed hours ago and my brain is too dead to write a worthy review. Basically - loved it. And now I want to take a trip down to Florida. Thanks for sharing. :)
12/29/2015 c30 11ChuckBlair08lover
Damn this was way to good. I loved every single bit of this story. I was so upset when Edward had to leave but at the same time I understood that they were young and you have tons of experiences in your lifetime. But it was clear that her heart always belonged to Edward and his heart to her. They just couldn't find that same excitement that same love, that energy with anybody else. In the end they knew that it was always going to be them. Edward and Bella. Thank You for writhing this wonderful, wonderful story!

xoxo
B
12/19/2015 c7 2ImYours1901
i put off reading this story for so long because i thought i already had, and was halfway through it or something. oh my lord, i missed out big time! this is amazing and just what i was looking for, no one writes stories like this anymore and i've burned through all the ones that are out there. in a way, i'm glad i left this for now. you've got me hooked, this story is taking me back to 2010 and how vibrant the fandom used to be, with new HS fics left, right, and center! :)
12/9/2015 c3 77049sma
My first kiss was on my porch and it lasted 2 seconds but it was perfect.
Must keep readibg, I'm loving this .story
12/8/2015 c18 wonderfullybedazzled
What song did he play for her?
11/22/2015 c30 jatani33
I LOVED this sweet story it would be awesome to get an future chapter of them being married and all tha sweet stuff!
10/28/2015 c16 Guest
When you play pool/eight ball, you don't call solids/stripes before the game starts or before breaking. Once a ball is legally pocketed, that's when you designate solids/stripes.
10/4/2015 c30 azilized
I've just finished this story! It was so great! I didn't really want to read it at first because I'm not in the hight school sweethearts thing... But as always your writing is so great that I couldn't stop reading it! Thank you !
9/27/2015 c30 Kenyatta Marie
Is this based off like a coming of age movie? If not it really should be made as a movie it's a great story
9/27/2015 c30 danielle.f.scott.5
3 aww
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