
8/27/2015 c30 marina
I can't thank you enough for sharing this story. I read it in one go. I couldn't help myself. it brought me back to my teenage years. my first love, first kiss, first joint ;)
nostalgia hit me hard after finishing your fic. I'm a crying mess other fic did that to me before.
Thank you Rochelle Allison!
I can't thank you enough for sharing this story. I read it in one go. I couldn't help myself. it brought me back to my teenage years. my first love, first kiss, first joint ;)
nostalgia hit me hard after finishing your fic. I'm a crying mess other fic did that to me before.
Thank you Rochelle Allison!
8/25/2015 c30
4Mrs.Lautner.Wolf
Rose and Bella are so over dramatic, starting fights over smalls things. I wonder how any of their relationships last. Great story.

Rose and Bella are so over dramatic, starting fights over smalls things. I wonder how any of their relationships last. Great story.
8/11/2015 c30 Debralynn
Loved this. Such a high school boy, but he definitely has depth. You just hope the ones you loved were thinking that way too. Don't know how I'm in my 40's but my head still relates to the teenage years. Love your writing.
Loved this. Such a high school boy, but he definitely has depth. You just hope the ones you loved were thinking that way too. Don't know how I'm in my 40's but my head still relates to the teenage years. Love your writing.
8/10/2015 c30 IReen Weiss
I'm terrible at reviewing. I owe you so many.
This story was exactly what I needed. Like catching the light subtle scent of a perfume I loved when I was young. It might be too bright to wear now... but I wore it once. And I can look back and remember it's vivid power.
Vivid power, told sweetly and softly.
Thank you for gentle, humble, honest words and a heartbreaking joyful story that doesn't make being a teenager feel like anything but magic. You're amazing. HUGS.
I'm terrible at reviewing. I owe you so many.
This story was exactly what I needed. Like catching the light subtle scent of a perfume I loved when I was young. It might be too bright to wear now... but I wore it once. And I can look back and remember it's vivid power.
Vivid power, told sweetly and softly.
Thank you for gentle, humble, honest words and a heartbreaking joyful story that doesn't make being a teenager feel like anything but magic. You're amazing. HUGS.
5/26/2015 c27 Nicole2581
I love bella's personality the further I read. I also love that she has absolutely no problem what so ever calling Edward 'out' on his silly bull shit, lol. You've written their characters extremely well and it's been awesome to see Bella grow and exert from the 'scared / unsure little girl' she once was to a confident young woman who doesn't hesitate to speak how she genuinely feels AND knows what she wants in life. Or at least where to begin anyways. The possibilities are endless and I'm excited to see what you have in closing. (The end)
I love bella's personality the further I read. I also love that she has absolutely no problem what so ever calling Edward 'out' on his silly bull shit, lol. You've written their characters extremely well and it's been awesome to see Bella grow and exert from the 'scared / unsure little girl' she once was to a confident young woman who doesn't hesitate to speak how she genuinely feels AND knows what she wants in life. Or at least where to begin anyways. The possibilities are endless and I'm excited to see what you have in closing. (The end)
5/25/2015 c24 Nicole2581
I'm pretty sure this goes without saying but I'll say it anyways, I am absolutely head over heels in love with this story. I hate that I'm getting closer to the end, lol.
And you my dear, are a brilliant writer! Thank you for sharing with all of us. 5 ***** Cyber hugs!
I'm pretty sure this goes without saying but I'll say it anyways, I am absolutely head over heels in love with this story. I hate that I'm getting closer to the end, lol.
And you my dear, are a brilliant writer! Thank you for sharing with all of us. 5 ***** Cyber hugs!
5/25/2015 c22 Nicole2581
Okay, I just have to say, I feel that it's detrimental that we all have 'Edwards' of our own. Seriously.
Okay, I just have to say, I feel that it's detrimental that we all have 'Edwards' of our own. Seriously.