for Starry Eyed Inside2/23/2015 c30 Guest
Sigh... What a lovely story. ️
Sigh... What a lovely story. ️
2/19/2015 c21 thunnababy
Loved this chapter. He has really grown up into a beautiful man, and I don't just mean in the looks department.
Loved this chapter. He has really grown up into a beautiful man, and I don't just mean in the looks department.
2/17/2015 c10 thunnababy
Good chapter. I finally feel that Edward really cares about Bella since he is so willing to actually have dinner with her parents. Love her mom, she's cool.
Good chapter. I finally feel that Edward really cares about Bella since he is so willing to actually have dinner with her parents. Love her mom, she's cool.
2/17/2015 c8 thunnababy
I'm wondering how much experience Edward has and how long it will be before he shows up with a condom. I can't see her parents allowing her to go to Orlando, that would be a big mistake.
I'm wondering how much experience Edward has and how long it will be before he shows up with a condom. I can't see her parents allowing her to go to Orlando, that would be a big mistake.
2/17/2015 c7 thunnababy
For perhaps the first time in a long time I am not so sure How I feel about Edward. He is such a mystery to me. He doesn't talk much about himself or his family, particularly his father. I don't like the fact that he smokes so much pot and also pushes it on Bella. But then again I am a mother and having never smoked pot I have no idea what it's like,
For perhaps the first time in a long time I am not so sure How I feel about Edward. He is such a mystery to me. He doesn't talk much about himself or his family, particularly his father. I don't like the fact that he smokes so much pot and also pushes it on Bella. But then again I am a mother and having never smoked pot I have no idea what it's like,
2/17/2015 c2 thunnababy
I see I started this a long time ago. Back then I didn't review every chapter so I'm not sure if I finished it.
I see I started this a long time ago. Back then I didn't review every chapter so I'm not sure if I finished it.
1/22/2015 c30 renewagain
This was wonderful. I grew up in Tampa and had family in vero so this was interesting to read. Brings back memories. I like the way you brought them together and I'm so glad for the EPOV chapters and future take. Very nice. Thank you for writing!
This was wonderful. I grew up in Tampa and had family in vero so this was interesting to read. Brings back memories. I like the way you brought them together and I'm so glad for the EPOV chapters and future take. Very nice. Thank you for writing!
1/21/2015 c21 renewagain
Oh my. So I selfishly nexted the through the first 20 chapters. But now I just have to step in and say "oh I get it now". I was just uncomfortable with them, and I know you say your characters make mistakes but I just felt that runaway feeling you have when you love someone more than they love you. It's hard to watch. But now that they are older, I see that history making their love stronger now. I don't know why I couldn't see it coming, I was worried. I should trust your magic :)
Oh my. So I selfishly nexted the through the first 20 chapters. But now I just have to step in and say "oh I get it now". I was just uncomfortable with them, and I know you say your characters make mistakes but I just felt that runaway feeling you have when you love someone more than they love you. It's hard to watch. But now that they are older, I see that history making their love stronger now. I don't know why I couldn't see it coming, I was worried. I should trust your magic :)
1/4/2015 c17 Guest
This story started out amazing but as things started to shift so did the quality. I understand realism and all that but I just hate that she lost it to Garrett more importantly I hate how much of a bitch she's being. I understand the push and pull of her and Edwards relationship and how he strung her along for so long but ultimately she can't be upset with him she was JUST fine with not identifying things back then so why get into a tizzy over it now? I don't think she should've held her breath but she doesn't have to be this much of a mega bitch. The only way I could see her being so upset is if she constantly tried reaching out to him and he just didn't answer and was completely cold to her. She's acting as though he's done something wrong here. If she knows the realism of the situation and she's even said as much to Garrett and Rose regarding long distance and relationships then why the fuck is she upset? makes no sense whatsoever.. I'm not liking this right now but you're a great writer so I'm going to keep reading to see if it improves, also this older Edward is just not as.. charming? I guess
This story started out amazing but as things started to shift so did the quality. I understand realism and all that but I just hate that she lost it to Garrett more importantly I hate how much of a bitch she's being. I understand the push and pull of her and Edwards relationship and how he strung her along for so long but ultimately she can't be upset with him she was JUST fine with not identifying things back then so why get into a tizzy over it now? I don't think she should've held her breath but she doesn't have to be this much of a mega bitch. The only way I could see her being so upset is if she constantly tried reaching out to him and he just didn't answer and was completely cold to her. She's acting as though he's done something wrong here. If she knows the realism of the situation and she's even said as much to Garrett and Rose regarding long distance and relationships then why the fuck is she upset? makes no sense whatsoever.. I'm not liking this right now but you're a great writer so I'm going to keep reading to see if it improves, also this older Edward is just not as.. charming? I guess
312/18/2014 c30 Atwiggs
This story is so wonderful. I love that it wasn't all fluff after all. It was such an interesting story from beginning to end. I'm glad that they realized that what they had was so worth working things out. I'm sure their love will stay strong and hot! Thx so much for the wonderful escape!
God Bless you for all your hard work in writing this glorious story. Your writing is a pure joy to read, even the hard times. Take care of yourself Luv!
This story is so wonderful. I love that it wasn't all fluff after all. It was such an interesting story from beginning to end. I'm glad that they realized that what they had was so worth working things out. I'm sure their love will stay strong and hot! Thx so much for the wonderful escape!
God Bless you for all your hard work in writing this glorious story. Your writing is a pure joy to read, even the hard times. Take care of yourself Luv!
12/17/2014 c20 Guest
the story is gud...bt dere r few casualties nd fickleness in d stry...odrwise its alri8!
the story is gud...bt dere r few casualties nd fickleness in d stry...odrwise its alri8!