for Starry Eyed Inside12/11/2014 c3 Vampfan1
Loving the story! Anytime I get to read a story set in a place imprinted in my heart it makes me smile. I lived in Melbourne FL for 16 years and worked at the hospital (IRMH) in Vero Beach for 15. Used to hang out at Sebastian Inlet a lot. Your story got me thinking about FL . A place I still call home and where my daughter was born even though I live up north now. About this time of year I really start missing the beach which I lived 2 miles from. Also miss those navels from Hale Groves! they're the best. I'm off to the next chapter. Loving the story and the walk down memory lane!
Loving the story! Anytime I get to read a story set in a place imprinted in my heart it makes me smile. I lived in Melbourne FL for 16 years and worked at the hospital (IRMH) in Vero Beach for 15. Used to hang out at Sebastian Inlet a lot. Your story got me thinking about FL . A place I still call home and where my daughter was born even though I live up north now. About this time of year I really start missing the beach which I lived 2 miles from. Also miss those navels from Hale Groves! they're the best. I'm off to the next chapter. Loving the story and the walk down memory lane!
11/10/2014 c30 Guest
Such a beautiful story.
Such a beautiful story.
11/11/2014 c9 Atwiggs
I can't deci if I like this EDWARD. I know how it is at that age, but he really doesn't seem to care about her other than the sex and Bella is just excepting that EDWARD cares. And maybe he does, but 16 year old boys are just driven to screw, they can't help it. Just wish they would be closer.
I can't deci if I like this EDWARD. I know how it is at that age, but he really doesn't seem to care about her other than the sex and Bella is just excepting that EDWARD cares. And maybe he does, but 16 year old boys are just driven to screw, they can't help it. Just wish they would be closer.
11/11/2014 c6 Atwiggs
I'm not used to them being quite this young and fooling around. Dry humping does get you by for awhile but then one day you lose control. Damn when you're 15 and horny it can be wonderful and painful and exceedingly dangerous. Can ruin your whole life! My sister was 15 when she got pregnant, not a fun time, my mom yelled, but my dad cried.
I'm not used to them being quite this young and fooling around. Dry humping does get you by for awhile but then one day you lose control. Damn when you're 15 and horny it can be wonderful and painful and exceedingly dangerous. Can ruin your whole life! My sister was 15 when she got pregnant, not a fun time, my mom yelled, but my dad cried.
10/19/2014 c30 
9xoxocullenluverxoxo
Ohh this story is seriously fantastic, kinda pissed off my husband when I told him I wouldn't have sex with him the other night so I could keep reading this! I thoroughly enjoyed this story and all the characters you write so well I feel like I'm right there in the mix!
9xoxocullenluverxoxoOhh this story is seriously fantastic, kinda pissed off my husband when I told him I wouldn't have sex with him the other night so I could keep reading this! I thoroughly enjoyed this story and all the characters you write so well I feel like I'm right there in the mix!
10/15/2014 c13 xoxocullenluverxoxo
I just want you to know that my heart is breaking right now I can't stand this heart fail... Dead! Bring Edward back!
I just want you to know that my heart is breaking right now I can't stand this heart fail... Dead! Bring Edward back!
10/10/2014 c30 Lafemmevegeta
I refused to go to bed before I finished this. Such a great story. It's nice to know through EPOV that he recognized he was a douche as a teenager but he was exactly what a teen boy was at that age. This story reminded me so much of my youth and teen crushes. I put up with nonchalant crap also from idiot boys and I hope my daughter will learn from my errors and stories so she can be a little more aware. You did a great job portraying life and boys and parents and the importance of best friends growing up. Really enjoyed your story!
I refused to go to bed before I finished this. Such a great story. It's nice to know through EPOV that he recognized he was a douche as a teenager but he was exactly what a teen boy was at that age. This story reminded me so much of my youth and teen crushes. I put up with nonchalant crap also from idiot boys and I hope my daughter will learn from my errors and stories so she can be a little more aware. You did a great job portraying life and boys and parents and the importance of best friends growing up. Really enjoyed your story!
10/7/2014 c30 momsteps
One of my favorite high school fics, although their beginnings made me cringe. Glad they took that break.
One of my favorite high school fics, although their beginnings made me cringe. Glad they took that break.
10/3/2014 c11 Marina Tsoneva
Wow...fifteen years old girls drinking,smoking weed and having sex...too much :D
Wow...fifteen years old girls drinking,smoking weed and having sex...too much :D
9/22/2014 c30 TheGreenPanther
I really enjoyed this. One of he better h.s. stories. I just love your writing. Now onto the new story.
I really enjoyed this. One of he better h.s. stories. I just love your writing. Now onto the new story.
9/16/2014 c21 rclaurel
Correct me if I am wrong but she was 16 when Edward went away and she couldn't wait 2 yrs for him,
Correct me if I am wrong but she was 16 when Edward went away and she couldn't wait 2 yrs for him,
9/16/2014 c20 rclaurel
Does he know she is not a virgin anymore, I still think she should have waited for him it was only 2 yrs..
Does he know she is not a virgin anymore, I still think she should have waited for him it was only 2 yrs..
9/16/2014 c30 1Flora Mile
Loved it, the ups and downs, the crazy antics of them bot and the promise at the end was just icing on the cake. So Edward, frighten to make a big thing out of something so special.
Just him in so many way, he loves her, but "keep it simple stupid" was the perfect ending to this story, you kept your Edward true the whole way through and that is what made this perfect.
Well done! Loved it, loved it, and loved it!
1Flora MileLoved it, the ups and downs, the crazy antics of them bot and the promise at the end was just icing on the cake. So Edward, frighten to make a big thing out of something so special.
Just him in so many way, he loves her, but "keep it simple stupid" was the perfect ending to this story, you kept your Edward true the whole way through and that is what made this perfect.
Well done! Loved it, loved it, and loved it!
9/16/2014 c19 rclaurel
First off where is all this supervision for these kids they are all like 18,19. why are they drinking so much.
First off where is all this supervision for these kids they are all like 18,19. why are they drinking so much.