1/8/2014 c7 BellaTesoro
I was glad that Bella, at least internally, told herself she would not go all the way with Edward
as she was feeling like she didn't want to give away her whole self to someone who might
not stick around. It was good finding out about Edward's family relationships. That he does
have a goal to be a lawyer like his mom and that he gets that he's only doing what his parents
did in their younger days. I guess that's why these kids give themselves up to pot, drinking and
early sex. I suppose they think it's just following in their parent's footsteps and the "don't do as i do, do as I say..." is
nothing but bull-shit.

1/7/2014 c4 BellaTesoro
These teens can't even appreciate how hot and sexy "shot gun" can be, ala Rob in Dior video with that lucky blond
model. No one has yet to gif that tiny section of the video.
Bella is acting like a typical young girl trying to grow up and experience all that she can, well all of these characters
are doing just that, while the parents are all deaf, dumb and blind to it all.

1/7/2014 c1 BellaTesoro
I don't usually like high school stories (go figure right, with Twilight bringing me here...) but I needed more of your
stories and thought to try this one out next.
I'd say you got being a teen and what it feels like to get blown away by first love. I'm in for another one of your
rides.

1/2/2014 c30 RoryCullen
I didn't notice at first that you included a second chapter - chapter 30 to this update until after I read chapter 29. I guess I got my future take after all. Thanks for that.

I loved hearing from them again. It was beautiful what Edward said to her after their space apart - all five hours - was over and giving her the sapphire was the icing on the cake. It's true giving into jealous, or possessive emotions that turn to anger and feeling insecure so quickly are just so dangerous, because they are usually completely unjustified. Edward was quick to cut to the heart of the matter though... He realized he didn't want to lose her, not ever, again. Got to love a guy - and gal - who knows who they want, and is smart enough to hold onto them. Loved the outtake, and futuretake and of course your writing style too. Hope you feel like writing another futuretake about these two some day too. Smilie Face

12/31/2013 c29 RoryCullen
This outtake was a pleasure to read. I'm glad I waited until the holidays to read it. I thought it was going to be a futuretake, which would have been nice, but I have to say reading these chapters in Edward's POV brought back so much of their story, that I loved it. All I can say is I wish there was more. I loved how well he knew her - that he could tell she still liked him, and how anxious he was about blowing his chance to get her back. Overall he came across as being so confident - like a guy who knows he's good looking, but inspire of that he was nervous around Bella...I find that so sexy. Thanks for posting.
Happy New Year Ro

12/31/2013 c2 EdwardLuver28
This was good. Jacob seems like the nice character. The ones I've read, he's usually crazy, mean, a dog, the baby, etc. So it's a nice change that he's nice.

12/30/2013 c30 1tweetytweets
I've postponed reading this last chapter way too long.. Since I didn't wanna say good bye to them.. But today my curiosity got best of me and I read it.. And loved it
. I love that they had rough times like normal ppl and that they made up fast.. Gives hope for rest of us ya know.. But I simply lived this... This for sharing:)

12/27/2013 c28 Guest
amazing. as always. loved it all. will probs read again in a few months.

-ImprintMeJacob.