
3/4/2014 c1 rukiafangirl
ummm... did NOT need last few paragraphs. otherwise, very good.
ummm... did NOT need last few paragraphs. otherwise, very good.
7/22/2011 c1
12lunaaltare
LMFAOOOO! XDDDDD! This was freaking funny! I just have to add this to my favorites list!

LMFAOOOO! XDDDDD! This was freaking funny! I just have to add this to my favorites list!
6/25/2011 c1 Someone
The weird part is, I just finished reading 'Blackout' like, five minutes ago. Before that, I read 'Mother and Child'... Weird... o.o I love your, stories, though.
The weird part is, I just finished reading 'Blackout' like, five minutes ago. Before that, I read 'Mother and Child'... Weird... o.o I love your, stories, though.
1/16/2011 c1 Jen
aww awesome story ok want to know what going to happen next
aww awesome story ok want to know what going to happen next
12/10/2010 c1
3dethangelx
hmmm.. i don't really want any dirty scenes when hitsuruki is in a teenage AU. But, still.. Dirty Hitsu takes the cake! ^-^

hmmm.. i don't really want any dirty scenes when hitsuruki is in a teenage AU. But, still.. Dirty Hitsu takes the cake! ^-^
9/29/2010 c1 Elcarim-Soberian-1222
HAHAHAHA! i love the whole thing especialy the ending! it is cute and funny! oh and what ichigo did yea that has happened to me before!
HAHAHAHA! i love the whole thing especialy the ending! it is cute and funny! oh and what ichigo did yea that has happened to me before!
8/29/2010 c1 karee-chan
Yeah... credit me folks XD only kidding... I did not write this awesome piece of fanfiction...
no matter how many times I read it i always laugh at the ending. I LOVE YOU ISILL!
"Wonder art" you make it sound as if we're writing some sort of epic book that'll change everyones life...!
Yeah... credit me folks XD only kidding... I did not write this awesome piece of fanfiction...
no matter how many times I read it i always laugh at the ending. I LOVE YOU ISILL!
"Wonder art" you make it sound as if we're writing some sort of epic book that'll change everyones life...!
8/27/2010 c1
6Denidene
Oh gosh, that was ABSOLUTLY GREAT!~ I love it. Thank you, thank you , THANK YOU!~

Oh gosh, that was ABSOLUTLY GREAT!~ I love it. Thank you, thank you , THANK YOU!~
8/26/2010 c1 idiosyncrasies
Too nice! Please... make this a story. A story this nice can never be completed! Just kidding! This is hilarious! Anyway, please make this a story! It's too nice to be true!
Too nice! Please... make this a story. A story this nice can never be completed! Just kidding! This is hilarious! Anyway, please make this a story! It's too nice to be true!
8/26/2010 c1
26SparklyColours
Oh my gosh! In the ending I totally burst out laughing! That was great!
-StarPrincess

Oh my gosh! In the ending I totally burst out laughing! That was great!
-StarPrincess