for Learn Your Lesson Useless8/27/2010 c1 
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Oh? COOL! Keep going I want to see next! I'm watching over the corner and ur welcome...since when u don't clean this Space Station !
31Ryou's fan girlOh? COOL! Keep going I want to see next! I'm watching over the corner and ur welcome...since when u don't clean this Space Station !
8/27/2010 c1 148RedHatMeg
Not bad, although I have some objections:
1 - At the beginning you write only about Alfred and Feliks pop out from nowhere to talk with him. The same with Feliciano.
2 - About this fragment:
"Yes; with Russian instructions; which in other words is useless!" his green eyes peeked at the papers between his cold hands trying to understand, or at least figure out, what was written on it. The Italian only moved his head to look at the calendar on his left side.
Most Poles know Russian. I don't, but my brother had it in school. We are learned two foraign langages: Englsh and one of the two: German or Russian. Besides, remember that large amount of Poland was under russian occupation after partitions and that we were in Eastern Block and we had to stay in "ethernal friendship with USSR."
But story seemed to be nice.
148RedHatMegNot bad, although I have some objections:
1 - At the beginning you write only about Alfred and Feliks pop out from nowhere to talk with him. The same with Feliciano.
2 - About this fragment:
"Yes; with Russian instructions; which in other words is useless!" his green eyes peeked at the papers between his cold hands trying to understand, or at least figure out, what was written on it. The Italian only moved his head to look at the calendar on his left side.
Most Poles know Russian. I don't, but my brother had it in school. We are learned two foraign langages: Englsh and one of the two: German or Russian. Besides, remember that large amount of Poland was under russian occupation after partitions and that we were in Eastern Block and we had to stay in "ethernal friendship with USSR."
But story seemed to be nice.