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8/27/2010 c1 9Akita Beilschmidt
Ment=yehdikan nyo~~~~T_T
8/27/2010 c1 36thisaccisabandoned
Bonjour~

adikku sayang, ini manis banget~ X) #apasih

dik, sebelum tiga titik, gak perlu pake spasi. Ex: "Kakei..."

sisanya perfect, dik. Deskripsinya juga tergambar jelas. Sayang, action-nya kurang DX *kicked*

keep writing, Yukacchi sayang~ :)

sign,

Matsu-nee durhaka *?*

p.s. : ah iya, sekuel...

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